Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

As always, you exceed my expectations and leave me wanting for more. Can't wait for Leo to get reunited with Quinn and teach him more about Qi. Also Erin, if she's training with leo she'll learn about Qi and maybe become his other Vampire knight. Also I see Fex leaving his family and joining Quinn. I know I'm getting ahead of myself but I can't wait.

These cliffs man....

Looking forward to the next chapter. I hope boneclaw doesn't ruin the practice. I like Edward, he has such goog will towards the new leader an his friends. I'm curious about the vampires playing in the shadows, but they'll likely show later on. Thanks for the chapter!

Oh yeah! This is what I'm talking about! Can't wait to see this fight!

When he tells you to not hold back and you reply:

I thin Quinn could just go to the council and state hes a Representative of the 10th leader and then explain Peter is his creation, and he requested Fex to not say a word

the last bit made my palms sweat slightly. Quinn's got to be excited to be able to use his full strength. however, I dunno if it's a good idea.. his Qi is obviously foreign to Edward. what if he mixes it and accidentally kills Ed. that would suck. maybe fight full strength and only show a little bit of the Qi.. Ed is such a huge deal in the plot now, and I love it. also glad I got the answer for the mist ability. so vampires can take on abilities same as humans if they dont have an ability already.. makes me think he was like timmy once upon a time and got a mist book. I hope quinn gets to try out shadow eater. I hope the author didnt forget about him having that skill.

im holding onto this cliff with my non dominant pinky finger and I'm so excited for the next chapter 😩

What if the fifth person the Blade family has chained up is a Vampire? That would be interesting. They're clearly old, and more knowledgeable than the other big families

Great book. Imagine if Vordan becomes a vampire knight, with 3 personalities.......

Ive been enjoying seeing the secrets explored and finally you get a good glimpse on how the system actually works and why quinn gets stronger from drinking blood i definitely have a few theories on the last few pieces of the why quinn got the book puzzle cant wait to find out

I hope that Vorden hots over his insecurities as he's has been an amazing help for Quinn I I don't like seeing him doubt himself. Should be interesting to find out what Edward think when Quinn fight him without holding back plus I hope that Quinn goes and find Leo soon so that he can make him one of his Vampire Knights along with Edward again.

Discord link ?? Also keep up the great work Jack . Glad youre getting into the groove of writing again .

so I'm sure after the ark of Quinn saving fex we will get back to the others but is true dream gone? like the blades just wiped him and his city from existing? I find it hilarious that he was so upset and had to go on his rampage after everyone told him not to and 5 minutes in hes like " ah ****..". I would love to see the others reaction and the stir it caused 🤣

thank you for the chapter ☺️

first 😁

but she may not be turned by quinn that's the issue. there's a punisher vamp on the planet she's on. so am asking if am the only one worried he'll turn her.

Leo’s probably going to be turned into a vampire knight

am I the only one worried Erin will get turned by the other vampire(Arthur)?

I s Quinn going to get dose of reality?