Lackluster MC

Story getting worse and worse smh

Never buying priv for the book again . Low release rate and absorb pricing for one chapter

Should try to lengthen the chaps

Why are the chapters expensive and to purchase priv expensive

Spoiler Spoiler Spoiler ! Don’t read if you haven’ read up till 594 Author don’t you think at this point in time this novel is no longer a reincarnation novel and the synopsis is now in accurate as to what was just released in the past few chapters . Seeing as how Ren is not a reincarnation in his own book nor was never a author

I hadda go back and re read this chapter and some other chapters in the book and I’m Starting to think that Since the author didn’t Finish the novel (Ren) and tranemigrated into the book, that somehow the characters are in a loop and that the new ren figured it out. Y’all Ever played fortnite and it’s Came to be that the characters figured out they’re In a simulation lol.

Author is this story finished ? Or are you writing it up as the chapters get released . Because honestly I’ve Been confused lately . This whole new ren thing some one Taking control of him is just twisting my brain.

Quite a bit turn of events . Guess time will tell what’s going on

.. author I’m Genuinely Confused . To go from Amanda and Ren to something entirely different with no con text , idk maybe this should’ve Been a extra chapter or something.

Idk I’m Honestly confused as to wth is going on in this chapter

And the fact Kevin can see the book*

Anyone remember how the second author Of the novel has changed things In the world Ren is in ? I keep thinking he has something to do with time remnant and the fact he can see the book

Thanks for the chapter my guy !

Author one more chapter For the night ? 👀👀👀

Ya know I been having this weird theory that Ren might turn out to be the demon king . And Kevin being the main character of the “novel” and Rena best friend , it’s Up to him to stop Ren . Would make a brilliant Twist in the story wouldn’t You guys say ?

Thanks for the chapter my guy 💯💯 Keep up the great work

That’s It ? Most of the chapter was him having his face in a chest ☹️

Thanks for the chapter , been enjoying the storyline 🎯

Gonna be honest , this story feels way to rushed.