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Comments of chapter undefined of My Vampire System

Dhelustian_Rhudz
Dhelustian_RhudzLv3Dhelustian_Rhudz

Ok

FishStix
FishStixLv10FishStix

Don't listen to them author, your doing a great job! keep it up!

RandomIsGood
RandomIsGoodLv5RandomIsGood

I really REALLY hope that there won't be any bl bull****ting with the mc and vorden cause I'm getting those vibes

BerryBlaze666
BerryBlaze666Lv2BerryBlaze666

You guys realize the author spends hours making these? Stop hating on their work for no reason. If you don't like the story, you don't need to read it.

Nekko_saint
Nekko_saintLv3Nekko_saint

~ owari no seraph bl vibes ~

Kittyperfect
KittyperfectLv14Kittyperfect

Maybe this is an another story of the "power of friendship" like that...? šŸ˜…

Da_Bananananana
Da_BanananananaLv10Da_Bananananana

I love the story, and I'm sorry about all of the people reading just to hate in the comments. Just a suggestion, but maybe try writing with more sentence lengths and types. It really helped when I figured that out in school. It somehow made my essays sound more professional, but that was alongside a rapidly expanding vocabulary.

Merevis
MerevisLv12Merevis

To be fair in this world setting Vampires pretty much considered to be Original power holders as there are no public Vampires. Asking for a chance to become one is not crazy daydreaming but a genuine attempt to grab a chance. But yeah I find most characters less 'hero of a novel' like and more what a real human would do. Fear, disbelief, denial can change your actions, the Mc is not doing whats best for him at all times but thats just how people are sometimes. I know I shouldn't stay up late to read webnovels but I will do it anyway and suffer tomorrow morning xD

berxeq
berxeqLv5berxeq

mc was idotic now he's hot blooded as well . whats next he gets horny for every jade like beauty ?

Jakilein
JakileinLv11Jakilein

Wow this is bad... But in a funny way. Still dont understand how it sits at first place, tho

SORRYFORTRAFFICJAM
SORRYFORTRAFFICJAMLv3SORRYFORTRAFFICJAM

So there's people with enough influence superior to the military.... despite the world being militarized so much because of the war, and there are students who waste their time and influence on beating up low leveled people in a school? Glad I'm not too far in so it didn't feel like a huge waste of time. Definitely dropping this troupe infested story.

Khillie
KhillieLv10Khillie

No bl.. šŸ˜£šŸ˜£ But i ship them...šŸ˜‡šŸ˜‡ CP .. CopyBrat x Vkid šŸ˜šŸ˜šŸ˜

MellowJello
MellowJelloLv15MellowJello

Iā€™m failing to understand why Vorden is being so nice with them. The only logical explanation is that Vorden detected the strangeness of Quinn and heā€™s taking advantage. If this isnā€™t the case and in the future he doesnā€™t betray him, Iā€™m calling this out as a shallow/forced relationship since they literally just met.

Everythingonurmind
EverythingonurmindLv3Everythingonurmind

Slapping faces, getting ice jade beauty and bromance

Novel_Addict_98
Novel_Addict_98Lv14Novel_Addict_98

what kind of lame military school is this? sleep in util 8:00am?! no physical education first thing in the morning. One class and then what feels like a long break?!

Rudy1love
Rudy1loveLv14Rudy1love

king vorden

hol_si
hol_siLv4hol_si

m

iZ0
iZ0Lv4iZ0

w

Reignhar
ReignharLv6Reignhar

nice chapšŸ‘

Harkyrie
HarkyrieLv13Harkyrie

thanks for the chapter

PathLiar
PathLiarLv3PathLiar

Nice