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Quite immature

Correct on all accounts, agree 100% and dropped at about the same time.

I agree with you, but also want to acknowldge how the actions of Nick in these recent chapters is not only pretty out of character, but also feel sort of like a plot device rather than normal progression. It appears as though the author felt trapped by the slower pacing he had put his MC in and wanted to quickly escape that by changing the scenery of the story entirely very drastically. Tragedy is great when used well, but this seems very extreme and I expected some foreshadowing rather than this so sudden and I really have no idea how he’s planning to write Nick out of this without it looking like blatant plot armor.

Quite immature of you.

Cringe

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Bro please stop talking about fate and how hes a slave to it, its very bad unless you have a plan to make him break fate or pick his fate or something

I have a feeling you lost around 10-20%+ of your readers with this chapter, myself included unfortunately.

Can Orion use his gift for more intimate uses 🤔

Not a huge fan of the way things are going. Predestination and the lack of free will sucks tremendously when the MC rolls over and accepts it. I can only pray something changes and there is a rebellion againt fate because fate and human free will do not get along.

Is it specifically railgun or is it general electrical manipulation being applied as railgun?

Please no generic stength enhancement gift 😭

Killing your novel any% speed run

When does he change into Kiba tho 🙏🏻

Then Nina

Second best is Alephee

Sorry bro but best girl is obviously Reen

I wish she did look but it ended up being just the memories after the king talking to him, would make for some interesting plot events

+3