John_Doever
I hope you have a general outline for important events and the ending. It's pretty helpful so it's harder to get sidetracked or lost on how to move the story forward. I've seen too many stories dropped because the author didn't no where to go with it so I hope this doesn't end up in that statistic. Sorry for throwing that thick wad of text your way. I'm just really hopeful for where this story will go. Great job so far.