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EldurJaalind

EldurJaalind

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I am an author with multiple book series' that are ongoing.

2019-11-19 JoinedUnited States
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1mth
    Commented

    hol' up

    Name- Shay Ramsay.
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    Gods' Impact Online
    Video Games · NoWoRRyMaN
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1mth
    Commented

    Ah, yes, consumerism.

    Each floor had dozens of rooms with different types of VR gears in them, depending on what type of game one would play.
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    Gods' Impact Online
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1mth
    Replied to Jack_Nades

    for real, where are my mediocre genes at?

    Shay squinted his eyes and furrowed his brows at Zach, and said, "Who are you kidding?! You won a 10 million dollar lottery last week, didn't you?"
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    Gods' Impact Online
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1mth
    Commented

    introducing characters like this is unnatural I'm sure you know this now, but I still find it worth mentioning. Instead of outright telling these things, you could use plot devices to show their dreams, circumstances, and physical traits.

    Kayden, 18 years old, has dark brown hair, black eyes, and a bodybuilder. He was Zach's childhood friend. But unlike Zach, he was popular because of his sturdy build. He was going to inherit his father's tech business.
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    Gods' Impact Online
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind5mth
    Replied to Zenna73

    heck if I remember. been a while since I read it

    "Daneel, such a solution cannot be made by one who is not at least an Eminent Warrior Mage. I've studied a small sample. The skill in magic required to cast a spell that uses such intricate particle manipulation is incomparable to any Exalted Human Mage like me. Of course, no matter how talented you are, it is impossible that you have reached that level. In fact, even the Grand Court Mage, who is the second strongest mage in the Kingdom, is also only an Exalted Human Mage. Who is the personage helping you, Daneel?"
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    World Domination System
    Fantasy · KillerHemboy
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to Raisgem

    I know, I was correcting, lol

    Li's first reaction was to walk up to a tree and place his palm on its trunk. He realized then how distinctly inhuman he was. He was almost three meters tall with a body comprised of wood, leaves, and bones.
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    Re: Level 100 Farmer
    Fantasy · John_Doever
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to Khalil_Ziad_Issam

    a bit late, but eh. a tiara is a crown typically worn by princesses.

    This woman was most uncommon: gorgeous, elegant, and with one outstanding difference from all others in the hall—she wore a tiara.
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    My Pick Up Artist System
    Magical Realism · SamsaraWithWords
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to Martin_Watson

    easy calculation and inflation

    In this world, the money was divided into four coins: copper, silver, gold, and royal coins. 100 copper=1 silver, 100silver=1 gold, and 100 gold=1 royal.
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    Gacha Sovereign
    Fantasy · Fixten
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to Raenatta

    I learned as I wrote, I don't write for cinnamon rolls.

    Ch 14 Chapter 14: Shattered Will
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    Ancient Cultivation
    Eastern Fantasy · EldurJaalind
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to Raenatta

    You assumed correctly. Y'see, I enjoy cliches.

    Ch 1 Chapter 1: Insanity
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    Ancient Cultivation
    Eastern Fantasy · EldurJaalind
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to EMpulse

    because one way he is forced into it.

    If the conditions weren’t fulfilled, the option would be grayed out and unselectable. For example, the [morning jog] option to raise [physical ability] couldn’t be selected unless it was actually morning. But in the morning, it would light up and could be chosen.
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    NEET Receives a Dating Sim System
    Magical Realism · Idle Fish Goes Ashore
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to Daoist638579

    white is not a light color. there is, green, blue, violet, red, yellow, and one more if I remember correctly

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    The King's Mandate: Anomalous System
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Commented

    mildly ironic considering the absence of color is technically black... you see, colors are just light that's reflected. if red light is reflected off of an object, we call it red. and white is the reflection of all colors...

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    The King's Mandate: Anomalous System
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to TheArcher7

    yeah, it's weird

    Her bright blond hair flowed in the wind like waves and her long, decorated white dress followed in part while an air of nobility surrounds her.
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    Spending My Retirement In A Game
    Video Games · DiceVR
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to Allen_Liu

    intriguing

    He would begin crafting.
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    Spending My Retirement In A Game
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to Sonichu

    it would just say wood

    The wood was a dark color and relatively hard. From what he could tell, it would probably end up looking amazing once properly shaped.
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    Spending My Retirement In A Game
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to Allen_Liu

    I must know the reference

    He would begin crafting.
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    Spending My Retirement In A Game
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to SuperFightingRobot

    Spoon

    [Spoon]
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    Spending My Retirement In A Game
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to Narvos

    it's a tree tree

    [Tree]
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  • EldurJaalind
    EldurJaalind1yr
    Replied to ShyviaAngel

    I'm a spider, so what? that one?

    [Tree]
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    Spending My Retirement In A Game
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