Comments of chapter undefined of The Wielder of Death Magic

Honestly this is simply bad, there's no redeeming quality in the entire story except maybe the death element but even that hasn't been introduced properly yet, even magic hasn't been introduced properly yet, frankly the world or anything hasn't been introduced properly yet, it's simply a disjointed series of events

I'm going to stick it out (because I'm bored and have nothing better to do) but my gosh, need to slow down and take some time to explain or do some world building before just throwing a bunch of nonsense at the reader.

It felt like julius would have been better off as the overprotective brother that beat him up and actually apologized after finding out the truth. Considering how nice the little sister is, the personality of the guy should be somewhat decent even if the guy is slightly arrogant.

Just a question, Since I still don't get why Julius all of a sudden wanted to befriend Staxius. How did Julius get hurt as u mentioned in this chapter?

Wow...this is really bad ....its not even about keeping up with the story....its just bad...5 chapters were enough for me....see y'all

Man im out, sorry can't read this is just getting more and more confusing.

i like your story a lot. you have a nice writing style. it feels like the mc has an aura which changes the ppl around him

He's the Death God...okay... ironically he literally oozes out something that makes everyone love and admire him........seriously?

Yes i know its the 5th chapter and im already complaining, but eyy i finally found plot armor yey Finally some progress on the plot, ignoting the lawsuit arc which was boring btw but "lets the go" for long chaps, i need something to waste my time anyway

I think the praises are a bit over the top, you gotta tone it down man, their first impression of him is already godlike, something is wrong here

Honestly I love this so far, seemingly a very different opinion from a lot but let me explain: As the author stated, lots of details are left out for you to figure out on your own and they don't just spoon-feed you some horses**t about the mc knowing everything and being enlightened. It's less like a standard fantasy novel and much more like randomly dropping in on some dude's life, which as you might notice, is exactly what has happened. It might not give instant gratification but I think that this story will feel far more involved than most .

I like where the story is going, but it would be really helpful if the author would separate the characters words from each other instead of putting them all in one sentence. And maybe making it a little easier to tell when the character is thinking something or say it aloud.

I like the story so far. Keep it up

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