Passerby_Venne
Well. Even if you adamantly refused to read the source material of your own fan-fic. Just how big of Dwayne Johnson are you living under??? Even fanfic writer and their grandma knows that spidy powers come from the weaver (a multiversal entity) one simply can't ignore that titbit cause every ff author is hellbent on shoving it in reader's face. And here u r write this b.s. No shade this isn't bad. It's just an odd decision to ignore such crucial lore.
You're right, there really are different canonical origins for various heroes. So I'm just going to ask you one question, how does your protagonist know the origin of this Spider-Man's powers? How does he know he won't kill his own family with poison or radiation? This is a plot hole or stupidity on the part of the protagonist, which could be considered another plot hole, since he should have mental processing at a genius level among geniuses. I know that this novel is already complete and there's nothing more to do about it, but I hope you take this into consideration in your future works, if any.
Passerby_Venne:I did my research very well thank you, I am aware of her, but you might not be aware of the fact that she isn't the source of his powers in all portrayals of Spiderman. Please drop this, before you get too involved. I made other choices you might now like, for example, the source of the Juggernaut's powers, if it is a mutation or if it is that superbeing and stone. Bot are canon. drop this, I am tired of people telling me that I should study the characters before I write, even though I already did an in-depth duty on them before writing. There are many different workers to all superheroes, and there are many explanations for their powers, all of which are canon. Drop this, it won't get better from here on out. You won't enjoy reading anymore than this.
it was fun at first... welp consequences... consequences, there's SILK, the INHERITORS, MADAM WEB, AGHHH MY BRAIN if it's to make them strong why don't you just wait for the falcon and the winter soldier arc, where they successfully reverse engineer the SUPER SOLDIER SERUM of DR.ERKSTINE, STEVE ROGERS the CAPTAIN AMERICA!!! WHY SPIDERMAN WHY!!!
Pues o lo es ,pero asia allá va si sigues poniendo cosas que se te ocurre a lo loco y no me malinterpretes es bueno el fic perooo le estás poniendo demasiadas cosas que nada que ves . Por ejemplo pusiste a Superman con regeneración okey es pasable por qué es un trasmigrador pero que ya cambies todo la secuencia del multiverso por gusto está feo y además solo puede haber 1 o 2 personas con poderes de Spiderman en cada universo dado que son los pilares en si de cada universo