the author does not stop forcing situations.

Rasengan is an A-rank jutsu, if I'm not mistaken, it and the Odama Rasengan, which is also A-rank, are the jutsus with the greatest attack power that Minato has, this in itself shows the rarity of these jutsus. An S rank jutsu is the Rasenshuriken, if the user manages to throw it, in the current era of the novel there are no more than 15 ninjas who can survive.

one S rank ninjutsu is already reasonable, one S rank Fuinjutsu is generous, five is madness. I'm not even going to talk about the ability to invent them, it's insane, I like overpower proganists, but that's going overboard. PS: as for rewriting the chapters, in half an hour you can edit them to make them less revolting. PS²: if you have time and interest, it would be good for you to deepen your knowledge about the chakra system and common capabilities, you must have thought of the Hyuga to think that domain expansion was feasible, but the hyuga have a special constitution.

I'll continue following because you have some interesting ideas, although poorly developed, but I advise you to rewrite the last 3 chapters. 5 class S Fuinjutsus are worth all the basic and average knowledge about Fuinjutsu that the Uzumaki clan has (this is the clan's guarantee of wealth), you are greatly underestimating this level.

what a boring chapter, this shounen anime character behavior in a character who was an adult police officer and should know how to maintain his composure, bothers me a lot.

B is fine, but when I say that it is an alternative, C makes more sense. The Uzumakis already have an island of their own, and there must already be something similar to a ninja village, so they wouldn't join any other village, not to mention that they already have the power of one on their own. Therefore, it is better for the Hima clan to found a village on its own, calling some clans that are not from the important villages, such as the Chinoike clan, the Jugo clan, Rinha clam (story from a Naruto game) and other clans that you can develop a story. Some examples for fan-developed clans would be clans for Dark Release, Metal Release and Crystal Release. The country of rice fields would be the best place to make a village, while the country of tea would also be a good place, especially if one of the available jobs in the village is forging weapons, it would be good to negotiate with Suna and Kiri, who do not have easy assistance to the steel country.

I remember it not being flawless, but it was better than this one.

I'll stop here, good luck to the author and whoever continues reading.

I believe it will be well explained, since the author wanted this to be the plot, there is an indication about time travel or sealing. It's bad that it already starts with a forced plot, apparently, but I hope it's a very good explanation.

chronologically, yes, the uchihas and shisui are alive.

The story has been showing signs of being forced for a while now, but it seems like readers aren't noticing. So many different factors and some details still following the same path as the original plot, this is unrealistic and the biggest example of this was Derek and Scott's conversation being practically the same words even with the MC and Stiles being on their side. Kate's part makes sense, but him taking this attitude towards Alisson goes beyond teenage recklessness and stupidity, it is something that destroys the very construction of the character.

I no longer like Ned Stark, but when the fanfic makes Cat cross the line and Ned just gets angry and doesn't take action, it makes me think the character is an hypocrite. He should have left Jon with the Reed house, he would have been much happier and in less danger of being discovered.

firstly, it is unrealistic for his father to decide to make a film with this theme and these scenes, secondly, it is a crime. You can already see the author's initial inequality, writing what he wants, disregarding readers and basic logic. I'm going to read a few more chapters to see how it goes, but I'm already out of it.

If he didn't report it I would quit on the spot.

I have to say that this battle was a total disappointment, pointless and illogical. Two ninjas standing idly by while a third dies, what logic is there in that?

occlumency, legilimency, parselmouth, metamorphmagus, clairvoyance and other abilities can be natural, so he could use occlumency and declare himself a natural occlumens. Apart from Parseltongue, which some fans believe requires a ritual to acquire, I saw a theory that other abilities, when natural, are like a recessive gene that is inherited by descendants of wizards who mastered this magic at its highest level.

It's much easier for him to use Occlumency and say it's a natural gift, giving him an advantage over Snape, since he tried to invade a student's mind. Now, there is no one who makes potions or invents them without minimal knowledge of the subject, not to mention how he got the right ingredients in the jungle. Reading this far, you can see that you are very young, maybe 17 years old and you also lack a lot of planning and question your plots.

I don't think it's that simple, there are many objectives for the MC to fulfill and eliminating just one training base wouldn't fulfill any of them. The point is that he allowed all these children to be captured and tortured just to complete the plan he made, so I don't think his morals are different from Team Rocket moral, willing to sacrifice unknown people for the sake of his goals. I doubt if it was one of his cousins ​​he would stick with the plan.

The type of author I like, thanks for the warnings. Unfortunately, due to the second warning I will not read this novel. Good luck.

It's simple, just remember what happened to Daenerys in the series, she freed the slaves and she was almost killed by the slaves.