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ErozothDraeor

ErozothDraeor

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Good thing the hour tracker doesn't work from Windows, I wouldn't want to know how much I spent reading on this site.

2018-06-18 JoinedCanada
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2d
    Replied to Binded_Ginger

    lol, what's the point of reincarnation or whatnot without knowing the world in a fanfic setting? Also, same plot but not being Isse? Pass.

    DxD Transfer Student
    Anime & Comics · Dragoniax
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2d
    Commented

    I get the name of the system and what kind of nove l this is... but this is way to much for the first 10 chapters, 1 chapter would have been enough. In the end, pure smut novels go nowhere, look for any that is older than 180 days, because people lose interest, its a balance between that and an actual story. If by chapter 50 25-30 chapters are smut? Pointless to read.

    Ch 5 Chapter 5: Rei Miyamoto Part 2***
    MULTIVERSE: THE LUST SYSTEM
    Anime & Comics · WizardKiki
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2d
    Replied to krokrok007

    Yea, like All Might having a son and not doing his best to hide that fact and where he lives, its a load of poor quality bullshiit.

    Superman in mha
    Anime & Comics · CWN1223
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2d
    Commented

    Really, you went with All Might having a son and he didn't hide it, and no one tried to kill, kidnap or bomb their house when its not some unknown hidden bunker? That's less believable than superman in this world.

    Ch 2 chapter 2: awakening
    Superman in mha
    Anime & Comics · CWN1223
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2d
    Replied to Aboode

    Agreed. The entire premise of this story is pretty damn stupid. Author: I want a kryptonian but not a krytponian so I will chose the closest character to one then pretend its a kryptonian but not tell anyone if I really did it or not or explain the powers of the MC so everyone keeps guessing. 1. Fake title, pure click bait, that's 0/5 already. 2. Character with massive flaws, on top of other flaws. 3. MC that lacks... critical thinking. Overall, I didn't make it far, the concept of the story just makes me feel like this is a total mess, a patchup of different things that were not even matched properly.

    A Different Kryptonian [Invincible/Brightburn] SI
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2d
    Commented

    Kryptonians are far stronger than any of this options, unless the author literally changes what this characters can do (and tell us) I think this is a novel to drop just because how fake the title is.

    Brandon Breyer (Brightburn)  
    A Different Kryptonian [Invincible/Brightburn] SI
    Anime & Comics · Unknown_To_All
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2d
    Commented

    He aint exactly a power buff to ensure that, only thing he got is smart girlfriends and plot armor, even now.

    "While you have memories of that... event, Daphne," said Harry. "I promise you; I won't let it happen this time around."
    Harry Potter:Flashforward
    Movies · AbrahamSmith
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2d
    Commented

    Such a let down from the MC. Rather than coming out and stating, "How will make a cure, from what?" "I am immune" she has to find out. He feels so passive.

    "Y-You're immune, aren't you?"
    How I Made The Apocalypse My B*tch
    TV · MiyazakiFan_18
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2d
    Commented

    Feels like the MC is massivly nerfed, mentally. He should be more than powerful enough to fight this people, especially if his mentality was not nerfed for WEEKS, he could have farmed levels like crazy. A power progression novel where the MC has no grasp for the need of said power.

    Ch 6 I Knew You Were Here
    How I Made The Apocalypse My B*tch
    TV · MiyazakiFan_18
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor3d
    Commented

    Some unbelievable leap in logic.

    "W-Was this you?" asked Kenny.
    How I Made The Apocalypse My B*tch
    TV · MiyazakiFan_18
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor5d
    Commented

    Not sure if it will change later but no items off the bat that will make him stronger? Immediately I don't want to read further. It already feels like most of the novel will be the revival mechanic and working around it, sounds more tedious than interesting to read. The only really interesting is the location and the world since its unique. adding to how the people are acting, like actual horror movie characters and not real humans: the priest, how the people talk to each other. I'm going to pass. If at least the system started with: This is how you get stronger rather than: here are your nerfs, I would have given it a shot. 100% of your readers will read first chapter, maybe second and that's where you need to... draw them in not: dumb characters, nerfs, weak system, any questions? should be fun.

    Ch 3 Chapter 2: Fuck you David
    Wrong Turn: No Turn Back
    Movies · THE_V1S1ON
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor6d
    Replied to Spelloyal

    Agreed, its a stupid concept, especially because the MC would not lose his store, it will, at best, serve as a mediocre side story of protecting his story but no real excitement since we know he wont lose it.

    "The essence of the gamer is a very useful one. It's extremely powerful in the long run. It turns you into a gamer, inspired by Han Jihan from the manhwa 'The Gamer,' though it isn't identical. This essence grants you a system with the basic functionalities of every gamer: a status with allocatable stat points and information, an inventory, a skill system, settings, and more since it even adapts to your unique needs based on your life situation," explained the shadow while holding up the blue essence. He then raised the golden one. "Meanwhile, this dimensional trader essence allows you to appraise anything, gaining information about it, including a value that you can understand. It allows you to trade anything, even conceptual things, but this needs to be done through a contract. Things like a sword, for example, can normally be exchanged for money without needing a contract. And lastly, the most important part of this essence is that you can declare a property you own, your dimensional store, connecting it to different universes. You will learn the details once you have your store. But one important thing to remember is that it will be a long time before you can move the store. Maybe even never. It depends on you. So choose a property or location that you can defend. The store can be destroyed from the outside, and you won't be able to get it back. And the cool thing is that all of this will be adapted into your gamer essence, granting you a system to control your dimensional trader with all its options and functionalities. This is the adaptation part of the gamer system that I mentioned."
    Harry's Multiversal Journey
    Book&Literature · SenseiCaffeine
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor6d
    Commented

    Story hasn't started and nerfs incoming. What the point of using existing concepts like essences then changing them via nerf?

    "The essence of the gamer is a very useful one. It's extremely powerful in the long run. It turns you into a gamer, inspired by Han Jihan from the manhwa 'The Gamer,' though it isn't identical. This essence grants you a system with the basic functionalities of every gamer: a status with allocatable stat points and information, an inventory, a skill system, settings, and more since it even adapts to your unique needs based on your life situation," explained the shadow while holding up the blue essence. He then raised the golden one. "Meanwhile, this dimensional trader essence allows you to appraise anything, gaining information about it, including a value that you can understand. It allows you to trade anything, even conceptual things, but this needs to be done through a contract. Things like a sword, for example, can normally be exchanged for money without needing a contract. And lastly, the most important part of this essence is that you can declare a property you own, your dimensional store, connecting it to different universes. You will learn the details once you have your store. But one important thing to remember is that it will be a long time before you can move the store. Maybe even never. It depends on you. So choose a property or location that you can defend. The store can be destroyed from the outside, and you won't be able to get it back. And the cool thing is that all of this will be adapted into your gamer essence, granting you a system to control your dimensional trader with all its options and functionalities. This is the adaptation part of the gamer system that I mentioned."
    Harry's Multiversal Journey
    Book&Literature · SenseiCaffeine
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor6d
    Commented

    I hate this choice, should have made the memories default and separate, why? Because its pointless, the author knows the plot and that affects the story regardless.

    'So it's a gamble that can result in anything from godhood to always having a weapon ready, but picking two essences will maximize my chances for something good... Why should I be worried? A life where I already know the plot of my world is boring. I'd rather have a fun and exciting adventure where I go all out and rise to the peak instead of playing it safe. I'll go with the gamble and pick the two essences,' was the decision of the wanderer after a short moment of thought.
    Harry's Multiversal Journey
    Book&Literature · SenseiCaffeine
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor1mth
    Commented

    I will pass. I found the Spider-Man story far better, other than the obvious comparisons I find this story boring, the MC is... lacking, the mashup of worlds is a mess, there are many holes that are very loosely "patched", some that made no sense and its a feeling I can't shake after so many chapters, the worlds were taken as is and mashed up like each empire, worlds, etc would not be different by the very difference of this world yet they are all identical to how we know them yet connected. The MC... meh, I just don't feel like he is good enough, it feels a lot like the intention was for him to be powerful, competent, capable and then it is being nerfed or held back by using his personality to balance it. Anyway, I found it mostly boring, a struggle to read, back to catch up on spider-man, that one wanted an OP MC, went for it and it works, this one went for OP MC (50K+ of force) then back tracked with far far to long growth period. Could it improve? Sure, but like many novels that say: It gets better after 50-100 chapters, I won't be around to read it.

    Ch 40 C40 Gamora’s Failed Escape
    I’m Star-Lord (SW Xover)
    Movies · AlienWarlord
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    Nice story, but trial ended too early. Chapter 40 maybe but not enough content to really decide if its worth it.

    Ch 39 Prosperity, All Mine
    Apocalypse - Infinite Plunder
    Sci-fi · bomer_allen
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    Feels like this is the real upgrade, he can see rep now.

    [Transfer condition: Favorability over 60%]
    Apocalypse - Infinite Plunder
    Sci-fi · bomer_allen
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    Going to pass on this. The cultivation system is controlled by the author too much, the time the MC cultivated compared to the number of months he got and his breakthrough do not match, now he will breakthrough when he needs, meaning the author will let him breakthrough for plot rather than on a schedule of some kind that will match his progress. It completely invalidates the cultivation he gets from plants, it could be 3 month worth or 20 years, he will only breakthrough if the plot needs it.

    Ch 20 Chapter 19: Qi Cultivation Level 4 (Seeking Follow-up Reading)_1
    I Practice Farming While the Rest Cultivates
    Eastern · Hear about the Way in the morning
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    I like it overall, except his cultivation progression, its so badly done it feels like the story would be better if there was none of it. he is 16... maybe 17, he was already level 2 of Qi, overall he got around 3 years worth of cultivation from plants (after he reached level 3 qi) yet he hasn't made it to level 4 yet, and this is almost 3 years of constant cultivation, far more than he was doing on his own yet he reached level 2, when did he start, when he was 4-5 years old?

    Ch 15 Chapter 14: Return_1
    I Practice Farming While the Rest Cultivates
    Eastern · Hear about the Way in the morning
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  • ErozothDraeor
    ErozothDraeor2mth
    Commented

    The cultivation progression sucks. He is 16-17 and was level 2, and close to portal if it. He got so many cultivation time, near or above 3 years but he is still level 3? When did he start to cultivate to reach the initial level 2, when he was 4?

    Ch 9 Chapter 8 Concealment Method_1
    I Practice Farming While the Rest Cultivates
    Eastern · Hear about the Way in the morning
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