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Comments of chapter undefined of Touch of Fate

graygam
graygamLv10graygam

Great writing, keep it up! Suggestion: use either ‘ ‘ when writing inner dialouge or in italics, it works better than [ ]

Wolf87869
Wolf87869Lv4Wolf87869

Truck-sama never misses a target.

PatientFall
PatientFallLv11PatientFall

Not until nose says he's sorry. [giggles] oh, I like this.

Storm_Water
Storm_WaterLv6Storm_Water

His struggle to maintain sanity made me giggle. Thank you for the chapter.

SMomoTempest
SMomoTempestLv14SMomoTempest

'WTF' 1and half day, and I tough he was In the Void for BILLION-OF-YEARS

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AlmightyLord5th
AlmightyLord5thLv4AlmightyLord5th

I love how you included the five stages of grief into the story.

Tiny_Stone
Tiny_StoneLv5Tiny_Stone

Haha truck-kun strikes again! Flashy style😛

MoonCafe
MoonCafeLv5MoonCafe

Truck-san is too stubborn.. If he can't hit you, he'll mostly attempt for mutual self destruction... The higher beings don't pay him for nothing right.. And he will be in a lot of trouble if one or more world's wasn't save just because he failed to cause the death of a potential MC that will likely be OP after reincarnation and stuff

Tenkay
TenkayLv6Tenkay

What is the first thing u would do when u start to go crazy? Love the star date one! Thanks for the chapter!!

William_Litsch
William_LitschLv11William_Litsch

The "death" didn't make sense and was confusing. Did he walk into traffic from stupidity? The talking to himself part was fun though.

Shady41
Shady41Lv5Shady41

I read the 5th paragraph about him being uninterested to everything and i already felt related to him

Space_Fox
Space_FoxLv12Space_Fox

Holy ****, his backstory is basically mine. I wont end up like him.. right?

Kyriakos
KyriakosLv15Kyriakos

This is awesome.

Alien_Space_Bat
Alien_Space_BatLv5Alien_Space_Bat

Tnx

fellowme
fellowmeLv14fellowme

😂😂😂😂😂😂2 days🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

ImJustQ
ImJustQLv13ImJustQ

Dudes said he could handle it and tripped out and went insane in 2 days🤣🤣

Nickjr321
Nickjr321Lv14Nickjr321

Thx

KieraRz
KieraRzLv4KieraRz

Hahaha 😂😂😂

Wabafet
WabafetLv6Wabafet

Lmao

CarefreeReader_Zen
CarefreeReader_ZenLv5CarefreeReader_Zen

added to library just for that part where he is losing it lol If the story will be as interesting as this chap, then it will be one hell of a story. Author you have raised my expectations for this story quite a lot...