Comments of chapter undefined of The Forgotten Princess

Anyone else amused he was able to accomplish this while Alicia was napping 😂

I hate that at the start of each chapter is a recap of the previous last few paragraphs, which are sometimes over a page long!!!!!. this feels like cheating to me as they're obviously do a word count and use this as a way of bulking out the chapters. Which is unfair on those that are paying. No disrespect meant this is constructive criticism.

the boss is also a great leader for caring for he's mens

He is a good leader to accept the surrender of the men.

The rapist were lucky they weren’t in Grandcrest... cowards. Go Leon!!!

These typos frustrate me so much!!! The early chapters before The editor had Less mistakes

Both are the real boss n don't want to give up for their men I like their spirit

Leon is a just king...he will give appropeiate punishment

Who is writting this book? So many errors and no corrections made...It’s difficult at times to figure out what is written. Please have someone go and check out all of the comments that have been made and reread what you have written, at times what you have written doesnt make a bit of sense. Comments from months ago reporting errors have not been changed. I would want my book to be error free, it is called pride

Hummmmm well thought Leon

Okay, I skimmed the rest of this chapter after reading up to the one on one duel. That pretty much already happened. The duel is redundant. And, with the fight taking this long, it surpasses Leons fight with the Queen Siren. Mercenary or not, having a human, non magical, fighter last longer than a century old magical creature eho was also friends woth the Almighty just doesnt work for me.

Too easy!😏 but a caring boss💪🏾

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good battle between the two leaders.

good battle between the two leaders.

Excellent battle between foes

See this! I just gifted the story: Lollipop

upto date the book has spelling errors, wallah it had to gather up the meaning of a wrong written words