Annette_Marshall
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Annette_Marshall3yrCommentedFast as I CAN
The sun has just set and we still could not find any entrance inside the ruins. The men were tired from searching all afternoon and I let them rest when night fell.- Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
Of me
"You are a smart one. Yes, you are correct." The Almighty One said. "The forbidden magic you know of is me and my wifes final resting place, where our bodies were laid to rest so many years ago." - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
OMG poorly written
I braced myself from an attack of ever the one behind me was an enemy. I slowly turned around to who it was. - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
Protecting whatever is at the center of the storm
"Yes, it is just staying in once place." I replied. "As if its protecting anything that is found at the center. There, look." - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
In one place
"Yes, it is just staying in once place." I replied. "As if its protecting anything that is found at the center. There, look." - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
Poorly written
"The surroundings are like when there is a strong storm." I said whole surveying the area. - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
Dove
Anatalia closed her eyes when Tempest flapped his wings. Not long, we were high up once again. Anatalia dived back under water and left no trace. We continued on our way towards the light. - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
To dive
"Okay." Anatalia replied instantly and was about to dove when she thought of something and looked my way. "Um, what kind of signal will you be giving, if I might ask?" She asked curiously. - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
Out in the sea
"Anatalia, it would be best if you go back to land and tell the others about what is going on out here." I said. "Tell them not to embark out on sea unless I give a signal. Just wait out on shore for my return. I will survey first the area." - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
Granmer poorly written
Not long the dolphins dived under water once more, leaving me, Tempest and Antalia. - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
Errors typos
"They said that they accept your appriciation and that the waters near our continet is the most safest and so they are willing to help in anyway." Anatalia said. - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
With them
Anatalia nodded and looked back to the group of dolphins and silently conversed to them. - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
Probably and thinking Seriously These errors are so frustrating
"There would be danger, provably." Tempest replied without thingking twice. - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
In front of us
I was a top Tempest when we flew to the open sea in a dim lit night. Because the moon was just a quarter full, the surroundings were dark. Good thing that Tempest's wings were burning, we can at least see a few feet radius of us. - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
On top
I was a top Tempest when we flew to the open sea in a dim lit night. Because the moon was just a quarter full, the surroundings were dark. Good thing that Tempest's wings were burning, we can at least see a few feet radius of us. - Annette_Marshall3yrCommentedCh 327 She is Missing (1)
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Typos
'When I woke up a while ago, she was no where to be found. Her side of the bed was also cold, meaning she had been missing for quite some time.' I explained. 'I will need your help to scan the vicinity. If ever she have gone by her self of have been abducted, I am she won't be far.' - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
Poorly written
I quickly went inside to get a white shirt to wear on top and my pair of shoes. I quickly exited the room and towards Duke Destia's room. - Annette_Marshall3yrCommented
What? Grandson?
"Well that will be a problem." Grandpa said. "That grandson of man is a very overprotective man. He will surely turn the whole continent upside down searching for you."