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Why reincarnate as a useless skeleton?
[WPC #224 Silver Price Winner: Undead and inmortal] Hello little soul. Were you murdered? Hit by a truck? Did you commit suicide or just slip in the bathtub? Well, the point is, you're dead. But don't worry about that, because this is not the end. Welcome to A.T.I.R. At A.T.I.R. we make sure that qualified souls who deserve a second chance are sent to other worlds to live a new life! Although it should be noted that not everything is free. It is likely that after your reincarnation, you will have to fulfill a certain purpose. But nothing too serious, so don't worry! Now enjoy your new life! WARNING: The journey between dimensions can cause the acquisition of superpowers, loss of senses (blindness, deafness, loss of touch, etc...), baldness, short-term memory loss, loss of organs, and body malformations. The agency is not responsible for the place or world where you will be reincarnated, if your species changes or if you suffer a problem during the trip. Any inconvenience you may have, please notify the complaints department (they will probably ignore it). Thank you for choosing A.T.I.R., have a happy life! "That doesn't sound very good..." Follows the story of Marcus, a simple guy who was reborn in a skeleton and despite all the misfortunes, somehow he is still "alive". Fighting monsters, demons, humans, ridiculous situations, and existential crises. Marcus will embark on an adventure to get his freedom in this new life and find the reason why he was called to this world. But his decisions could alter the destiny of an entire universe. Starting from the bottom to reach the heavens. **** Sigh... Look this is my first novel so I honestly don't know how to write a good synopsis without making too many spoilers But trust me, the novel is much better than this synopsis. I would appreciate any kind of critique to help me improve as a writer and English is not my native language. So I apologize for any grammatical errors, I will try to fix them if you let me know. I will try to post a minimum of three chapters per week.The chapters are between 2000 to 3500 words. (The cover was made using A.I)
Darksky_ll · Fantasy4.4The Great Exotic Food Critique
This is not a story about exotic foods. Nor does it try to tell an epic tale. This is a story about a ill-fated reporter whose luck shifted for worse, when he was transferred from lifestyle department to foreign affairs department. CoverPage credits goes to ArkaneStudios(Prey)... I don't own the rights to this cover and will remove it instantly if the artist wishes so.
UnhingedTaboo · Sci-fiNot enough ratingsCritique of Web Novels
After reading many webnovels, it became apparent to me that there was an urgent need for a definitive discourse on the judgment of webnovels. I have observed far too much degeneracy and baseless opinions voiced by flat-headed, insipid, nauseating, illiterate charlatans over the internet. Beyond my desire to counteract negative influences, this book will serve as the review guide to any web novel reader. It is my complete intention to derive the principles and judgments in this book from the ground up, so that any sensible being will be obligated to believe in it, or otherwise be deemed foolish.
Dikastis · WarNot enough ratingsReincarnated as a Jade Beauty?!
Everything was going well for him: a well-earning job, a car, a home, but then he was tossed into a world of immortals, in the body of Jade Beauty of all things! ------- Hello, there. I'd written this novel a while back and only recently picked it up again, and decided to post it. I write mostly for fun, so uh... I can guarantee no update consistency. I will try to post 3 to 4 chapters a week, but again, I can't guarantee anything. PS: This is a Gender Bender work. If you dislike that, this is not for you; just don't give it a bad rating/review for that. However, Gender Bender does not have much relevance to the story. This was an idea I had a long time ago when I'd read the first Transmigrated-into-Villain/Young Master story. That's when I wondered what if it was written from the perspective of the Jade Beauty instead? So, I came up with the idea of some guy transmigration into the body of one. But at the time, I despised the 'conflict' that came with the category, so I kinda skipped the entire thing. So don't expect gender identity issues from this story - even if there are, it will be resolved in a few chapters at most. This is primarily a Progression Fantasy/Power Fantasy from a Jade Beauty's perspective. Though, you can also think of it as an amateur author's way of escaping his responsibilities and not studying the female psyche deeply. Like I said - I write for fun. PPS: I don't have much writing experience and I do want to improve, so your critiques are welcome. Just don't be too harsh - my glass heart might just break. PPPS: MC will be extremely strong in her Cultivation Stage - and the strongest later on, but that doesn't mean much in the Cultivation World, where there is always a 'Heaven beyond the Heavens'. PPPPS: This is still a WIP. I have the general plot idea in mind, but nothing concrete. Plus, I haven't made the mechanics of this world as concrete as I would like. So, I might make minor changes here and there. If I do make such changes, I'll do it retroactively across all relevant chapters. So, early readers might get a little confused, and I apologise for that. Of course, I'll post a note when I do make changes. PPPPPS: This story will take a while to pick up. So don't expect MC to have tremendous odds stacked against her from the very beginning. In fact, this will be more slice-of-life at the beginning.
DaoistDumbledore · Fantasy4.7Rebirth of a Hollywood Socialite.
This is a translated Chinese novel. I am not the author, just translating for fun. Translator: Doyenro (Fan Translate) Author: Zhuang Jiang Alternative universe (AU) She can produce the most terrifying horror films and also create the most profitable commercial films; she can turn artistic films into commercial successes and turn commercial films into artistic achievements. Future critiques of Laila all say that she is synonymous with the Hollywood miracle, one of the greatest directors of all time. She even unintentionally becomes the most skilled photographer and strategist. However, she knows that all of this comes from her biggest secret, which is—she has been reborn! T/N: * The Female Lead(MC) is very patriotic to her old country, so it may be annoying to some people. * The English gets better from chapter 65, the chapters 1 - 65 will be edited soon. * The actors' or actresses' characters may be different from reality. It is just an alternate universal fictional novel. * Alternate History * Contact me if a novel of the same is officially translated so that I can stop. * Original Chinese novel completed.
Doyenro · Urban4.7Ancient Hypnosis
A person gets transmigrated to ancient china as the current crown prince with a world conquest system which gives him some abilities which he uses for more than just world conquest. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------ this is a novel focused on smut which i have never written so i want to try it. I am a total amateur in this area so some critique would be helpful. Contains: hypnosis/mind control, Yandere( A lot but will like be more the submissive type). a little netori but NO NTR and will also contain underage sex till even 12 or something like that so if that disgusts you pls don't read this. Also Incest also if there are some pictures they are from pintrest and if their respective creator doesn't want them here il put them away ------------------------------------------------------------------------- I just wanna say i respect woman and people and that this is just a novel with no disrespect to women
Big_Fan_Of_Daoism · Fantasy4.6(Hiatus) I've Reincarnated With An OP Gacha System?!
You know, my mother and father always told me to do good deeds, help others, and be an upstanding citizen. If I do those things, then I'll bring good Karma to myself, and life will reward me. That was a lie.. or was it? Reincarnation is tricky stuff, and now I have a whole lot of other things on my plate, and I'm pretty sure I can't eat most of them. Gods, demons, different races of different creeds, and a vast multiverse to explore, and it all began because someone sucked at driving. With my newfound body and System, I'll take on everything, while having fun at the same time of course! I've improved my writing a little, but by all means please let me know if you'd like something added. If you have any suggestions, tips, or anything else, then please critique me. If you're gonna leave a bad rating then at least tell me why please. A HUGE thanks to Commonnerfer and Mister_Immortal for inspiring me to write. It would mean a lot to me if you went ahead and at least tried their novels. I found them funny and well written. Drop a stone for them while you're at it! If you two are reading this, thank you for giving me a drive in this world. *I do not own nor claim to own any artwork on the cover unless this notice is not present. If you are the owner of an image I use and want me to take it down, please contact me as I will do so immediately.*
KallenEmilia · Fantasy4.7Now I am Alexander II of Russia
A historical novel I decided to write to practice my English, so forgive any grammar or continuity errors, I welcome critiques and ideas for the development of the novel. ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I was thrown into the wheel of reincarnation as a historical figure in the year 1818, at the beginning of the Victorian era. I, a simple university student, am now destined to live in a bygone era in a country I don't know much about. It is an opportunity to make a grand mark in history, as I find myself in the body of the newborn Alexandre Nikolaevich Romanov. The MC is manipulative and not a good person, he won't have a harem, he will only have one wife, but like his historical counterpart, this won't limit him much. I intend to write 18+ scenes, both sexual and somewhat gore, but there will be a warning beforehand. --------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- I don't have the cover image, as it belongs to Jesse Smith.
LuizDarui · History4.7Naruto: Village hidden in the Ocean
Noel dies and gets reincarnated in the world of Naruto with a system. He will create his own village as you guessed it from the name. --- No Harem, and I haven't decided on the romance part. --- And this won't be some multiverse travel kinda thing but he will start a new journey in a new fan fiction after I complete this. Hopefully. Discord:https://discord.com/invite/jZdfthff --- English is my second language, be kind. --- ** Hey guys so this is my first work which i will NOT be dropping no matter what cause i kinda want to practice to write my original. So feel free to critique. ** I dont know how to write a synopsis yet so you can ask me questions ill answer it. ***** I do not own anything except the OC 5 chapters/week
Bullshitter · Action4.9MALIGNANT UNION:Tale of a mobster and murderess' in a fantasy world.
Step into the world of Maxwell De Venti, feared Mafia lord and his deadly wife Angelina De Venti, a notorious assassin and serial killer. As they awaken in a strange new realm vastly different from the earth they once knew. Do not own the art, credits to the owner. New author with no editor yet, I'll do my best. Reviews and critiques will be happily appreciated.
Sofie_Vert01 · FantasyNot enough ratingsFiveHead Monster: Primordial Beast Of Chaos
Quite some time ago, in a world not so different from Earth, Hailing from the Chaos at the dawn of creation, a lone hatchling of legendary origins takes its first breath- or rather, multiple breaths at the same time. As it turns out, this hatchling is gifted with several heads. Never alone, this curious creature seeks to scour the deepest depths and highest peaks. ------ The world is an Ancient time period Earth, but includes many fantasy-like additions inspired by the mythologies of our Earth. As you can probably guess, the MC is a 5 headed Hydra, not exactly the Lernaean Hydra but in the same mythology nonetheless. Story starts during the reign of Titan King Kronos. As a side note, it won't only be Greek mythology but also others as the novel goes on. Take note: - No Romance! Hydra does not love. - Mc will be relatively OP, nothing over the top or ridiculous but certainly contains fast growth befitting of a higher being. - 1k or so words per chap. - MC is Chaotic neutral (obviously) - And lastly, no turning into a human. Those are lesser beings, they have only one head. - No little band of monster friends that the MC keeps around so they can stay weak, only grind for us. Leave a review of your thoughts, critique is appreciated. This is my first Novel so advice is welcome. Please share your thoughts. Reviews, comments and stones are greatly appreciated, and don't be afraid to point out things you personally don't like.
FamiliarHydr · FantasyNot enough ratingsReborn as a Symbiote
Synopsis Hi everyone, just to let everyone know that this will be a story mix of both Wuxia and LitRPG. There will be a system with point being use involve in the story but it will not be a CASH app where you can buy EVERYTHING in it. Please if you can critique, comment, review, and spare some time to read my novel. Thank you for giving my novel a chance. A child bless by birth, curse by destiny. The child, a little girl, trapped in her own body from a painful illness. The only child to a growing small clan Matriarch, father nowhere to be seen. The little girl Yao Zi, helpless and hoping for the future. A mysterious foreign entity, a symbiote, whose past haunts him. The symbiote, lost traveler, free from his prison. The only of his kind he ever seen, all alone in a foreign land to him. Cold and lost simbiote Shimmy, alone and seeking power for the past. The two meet in a most coincidental way. One who needed a cure, a miracle to live, the other needed someone, a path to rely on to live. Watch as two lives intertwines, revealing the little girl's future and the symbiote's past. See as how they face the world together, one who almost loss everything and the other who have lost everything. What choices will they make and what effect will it cause to other? (Picture is not mine) “I will also be posting this story on RoyalRoad.com” ^_^)>
LazeePanda · FantasyNot enough ratingsThe Unparalleled Sovereign of Might, Speed and Annihilator Drones
Disclaimer: This story includes visual portrayals of extreme violence, blood, and gore. [Audience Rating: 18+] — Meet Jack Greyson, an ordinary human from Earth who unwittingly activated a certain item that transported him to a distant world located in the vast and endless Seas of Stars. Appearing as the weakest and most feeble in this world, Jack must fervently train and swiftly grow stronger using the 'Trifaceted Talent System'—a potent and enigmatic, talent-infusing interface of unknown origins. This system will transform his vulnerability, frailty, and oppression into unbounded, obliterative savagery, immense desolating strength, and unparalleled destructiveness by imbuing him with three phenomenal talents: unbound might, limitless speed, and the ability to ceaselessly manifest countless, myriad battle drones—technologically sophisticated ones hugely advanced than monumental fighter drones from hundreds of thousands of centuries in the future. Furthermore, each of these talents come with complementing marvelous and fascinating abilities that will make Jack apocalyptically strong, destructively fierce, and incomparably fearsome. But all these, he would need to constantly, diligently work for and earn by completing numerous secret tasks, as well as minor, common-event to grand, special-event missions that have varying degrees of difficulty, dangers, and peril—some could turn him into a disabled cripple with torn-off limbs and shredded, gashed, or melted skin, or rendered as a viciously ruined corpse. While others could leave him as scattered drops of bright, rusty red fluid, staining the ground, walls, or filling the atmosphere confined in whatever area he was reduced to as either crimson fog or mist. To know more, accompany Jack Greyson in his unrelenting, dauntless, and indefatigable, extremely perilous quests across numerous unbounded worlds or vast dimensional planes that dot the 'boundless Seas of Stars' and are filled with strange, strong and agile entities, ravenous beastly creatures, and terrifying sentient monstrosities. In these unknown, foreign worlds and planes, Jack will attempt to dominate their powerful inhabitants and leave behind his indelible mark, lingering vestige, and everlasting legacy on each of them! *** This story intertwines compelling epic actions, daring adventures, advanced technology, preternatural powers, a unique Level-Up System, romance, and the complexities of enviable, loyal and beautiful friendships turned family. Enjoy! :) _ P.S: Remember to cast your vote, share your thoughts on what resonates with you or doesn't, and provide critiques. Your feedback is appreciated!
koladeizdavid · FantasyNot enough ratingsMy Yandere Sisters
After the remarriage of his father shortly after his mother’s death, Rowan gets a shock as he find himself with two new step sisters that seem to be just a bit too perfect. Soon enough though as things start to take a turn in his life, he will discover just how dangerous family can really be. Will Rowan learn in time how to keep those around him and more importantly, himself, safe? Hey there folks, Author here, so this will be my first novel so please do not expect perfection, with that said, I’ll be doing my best to make this a story I can be proud of and that readers can enjoy! I’m not exactly sure where this story will go, but hopefully the ride there will be tolerable if not enjoyable for all involved! Please let me know of any ideas or critiques as this story continues, thank you! *Also note that all characters and events and their depictions are purely works of fiction. Any similarities with real events or persons are coincidental and not intentional in any way. **Any mature interactions or activities are done by adult characters over 18 regardless of their appearances
MLClausen · RealisticNot enough ratingsMy Crusade
This is a world filled by different races, diverse creatures and unknown powers. It is a harsh life, sometimes filled with sorrow and misfortune, other times joy and opportunities. Fights against monsters or evolved creatures are common. Magic is a medium available to few. Mikael is a boy born in this world, still young, uninformed and in search of his self. His journey begins with misfortune, experienced tragic events and acted in ways no one his age should have done so. He is fleeing, hiding and fighting his enemies. But also protect, saves and encourage others. Among his life he learns constantly, using his knowledge to his best abilities but still makes mistakes. No one is born perfect. This is my second attempt at a synopsis. If you think it should be altered in some way to make it more fitting, please leave a comment. Leave comments, reviews and critique. They help to keep motivation and feedback is always welcome. Release rate is one chapter a day, around 1700 words. 'Cause i picked english as a medium to reach a bigger audience despite it not being my first language, please bear with occasional misspelling and grammar mistakes. I try my best not to make them. I hope you enjoy my novel. Picture taken from: https://www.google.de/url?sa=i&rct=j&q=&esrc=s&source=images&cd=&cad=rja&uact=8&ved=2ahUKEwiU3YSMzI3nAhUP3aQKHetSCNcQjB16BAgBEAM&url=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.deviantart.com%2Fmiho24%2Fart%2FYoung-Knight-40907009&psig=AOvVaw0_fmR2dcoVyTfPSGCEh3dS&ust=1579452193808905
AntikeCoffee · FantasyNot enough ratingsIncentive to Succeed
An old, senile and lonely medical doctor dies in the ward of his own hospital. Unsatisfied with his "meager" accomplishments, he accepts Death's offer for a new start at life however random his chances are in a world where he is a scorned bastard of a resident Duke. "I will hold on to my memories. Memories of failure, I have no doubt will be a marvelous incentive to succeed in my new life. No matter what. I will succeed, one way or another." ***Chapters will be posted twice a week, every three days. I've made a discord server btw. You can pop in and out offering your critique or praises here;https://discord.gg/YbxrtrU ***** Need a freelance writer? https://www.fiverr.com/s2/88989fb0f2?utm_source=com.google.android.apps.docs_Mobile
Tim_Saian · FantasyNot enough ratingsHuman in a Demon's Hide
I had recently enrolled in the military as a lowly footsoldier. Oh, before you could proceed any further, let me tell you about myself. I ain’t some patriotic soldier that’ll lay down my life for the sake of my country. Hell no! That shit is for the people with loose screws! I only had a few goals when I joined the army: March into battle, kick some ass, and earn me some cash! Achieving glory on the way wouldn’t hurt. I just need enough money to feed my little brother and sister. Their world is all I want to protect. The glory is for washing clean the stains that my father left on our family name. We became such a joke in the country that even our mother abandoned us. I don’t know if he really did betray the country, but that doesn't matter. For my little siblings to suffer the same mockery and humiliation that I did is unacceptable! To protect the smiles of my only siblings, I'll do anything. Yet, life manages to shit on you when things are just getting good. --------------------------- Hello, author-san here! This is my first story, set up in a fantasy world. It's based on the medieval AND steam era where magic is rare and alchemy is used widely as a weapon by people. There will be lots of action, adventure, betrayal, tragedy, romance, etc. ahead. Warning- The mc is a bit mean and foul-mouthed introvert. There would be strong language and lots of monologue narration by the MC. The chapters are fast-paced and progressing faster. Also, English isn't my first language, so don't expect perfect grammar :( P.S. - I appreciate constructive critiques and feedback! It fills my motivation gauge and increases the release rate of chapters (/>3<)/ thanks for checking out (Demon's Hide)
HomelessDancer · FantasyNot enough ratingsVillain's World
Welcome to Villain's World, where mercy is a forgotten language, and violence the currency of existence. Social status here is determined by one's Tier of Villainy. Though cutthroat and ruthless, Antagonia ran just fine… Until one day, portals to the Human World emerged. Hidden beneath a veil of justice and liberation, the Humans invaded their lands. Through hypocrisy and shady ploys, many Villains fell victim to these cunning Humans. The Demon Family, a once great Villain Clan, was amongst the victims. Daseos Demon, the fifth son and a child at the time, was left to fend for himself as his entire family fell to the hands of the humans. He was orphaned to the L.U.S.T Inn, a high-end brothel where the owner, Madame Allura and her courtesans became his family. This is the story of Daseos's relentless quest for revenge as he ascends the villain hierarchy. His aims are twofold: to exact vengeance for his fallen family and to safeguard Antagonia from the malevolent humans who feign justice while pillaging their lands. Join Daseos Demon as he confronts not just external adversaries, traitors but also the darker aspects of his own nature as he navigates the murky waters of a society where morals were but a joke. And of course, with the astounding death rates of this harsh environment, it only made sense that its people evolved to have turbo-charged primal urges, to survive, to destroy, to… lust. "A Villain’s World" offers a compelling narrative, filled with intricate characters, moral ambiguity, and a critique of the notions of good and evil. It is a story that uncovers the complex fabric of villainy, raising uncomfortable questions about justice, retribution, and the very nature of power.
MrBtheNovelist · FantasyNot enough ratingsUnstable dungeon
Did Aki think he would be turned into a dungeon in another world just because he caught a shiny stone falling from the pocket of a random stranger? Yes. He could not expect it to actually happen though. Well, at least now he didn't have to go through with his appointments with his phono, shrink, and the last year of high-school. This world is filled with random things, people, cultures, religions, cuties and more, certainly he will find a way to live a good life. ***** This Aki here is something society would classify as highly functional sociopath, and he is set for a, relatively, real and cruel world where his craziness, personality and powers will have strange interactions on some occasions. Is it a bit of a pleasure write? Which novel isn't at this point? Just read, laugh and critique.
Akichi · FantasyNot enough ratings