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Kyndig19
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Honestly I was hoping this would be a good read and it seemed like it was off to a good start but way to many errors and POV changes at the drop of a hat with no indication of the change. By about Ch 20 I found it al but unreadable.

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Legend of the Supreme Soldier

Fang Xiang

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LegolasGreenleaf
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I got to chapter 68 and it just got too much to handle that it gave me a headache when I am trying to relax. POV changing without you noticing sometimes till it feels off where you discover it is a different person now or how one chapter even had him in the virtual reality then it said MU has his identification ready to pick up so he drives his mech to it which at that point he is back in reality but people thought he was still in virtual till the end of the next chapter cause it seamlessly combined the two. Plus he was racing with his mech and driving recklessly that I thought it was VR but it was reality. Then it is lacking information at parts where it needs it to make sense where it feels sloppy or lazy where it could be explained sometimes but without it things feel like they only happen to push the plot as no other reason is really there sometimes. Like virtual reality was lacking information which needed it as soon as he was there to explain how it worked in this world like do people get different clothes or is it the one where the person is wearing the stuff they are wearing at the moment, guessing it is clothes given by the system since nobody looked at mc funny wearing clothes later described as refugee looking. How VR doesn’t have safety protocols for the users it seems in mech training where it can protect the users as falling apparently can damage and traumatize some people which seems weird cause if that is the case why is there no one with trainees to keep them safe. Also how is falling a big deal but dying in battles not that is information needed as it makes him saving someone from falling seem great for no reason besides to have the other characters obsess over him more. Sorry for long reply I will stop here just a lot wrong which is unfortunate as I liked the concept of the story so tried to stick with it hoping it got better.