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ok, I've read all the available chapters . I must say, your writing and storytelling are topnotch. I like the detective elements put out here, which I hope will continue . One thing I personally never liked about " super detective in a fictional world" is that mc wasn't a really detective. He wasn't really solving difficult crimes. At first , he was pretty much going all john wick on his enemies, and later, it was pretty much a superheroes story . I particularly disliked his cloning powers . I hope you'll keep these detective elements in the future storytelling as well.
Working as a private detective in the fictional world
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I think so too, but I figure the problem with these types of novels with so many worlds pushed together is giving the MC too much power. When the MC is capable of being a Marvel hero, it won't make sense for him to investigate people like a detective when he can just beat the shit out of them. I have tried writing these sorts of novels (Building a Guild in a Fiction World using my Gamer System) in the past and I went through a similar problem hence the reason I dropped that one. So with this, I am trying to find a perfect balance between having power and having a reasonable progression through the plot where the character has stakes in the story and isn't just coasting through the story like a god. Anyway, that was a long ass reply lol, but I am glad you're enjoying it.
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