it's an overall interesting story. The story progression is interesting. The writing quality is also amazing. But it'd be better if you consider paragraphs while writing the story and I'm still not sure if the story would ever get to hp

I'm honestly not sure if author has much knowledge about hp . It feels like most of info he's gotten from fanfics. Especially with his critics about study materials or topics of hogwarts which can be easily answered if you think about it .In this chapter, mc is actually trusting a goblin. I'm pretty sure goblins ate the most untrustworthy in the whole hp stories. Well let's see what it will offer

asterion*

hey author, sorry for my ignorance. But I don't get it exactly how would clock tower help asterisk establish his rule over the country . With allowing muggle, it only seems that dumbledore is the only one that's winning this batte.

I don't know who this shizuka is . From which is she from

what a stupid fight. Guys using self-defense techniques to attack against a horde of monsters. Let's forget that . The guy apparently has ultra instincts. He's dodging attacks miraculously .And with what ? a fking decorative sword. It's probably my fault for expecting good atory

what kind of fking defence techniques he learnt which is gonna work on monsters. Doubtful

The saying ends justifying the mean isn't something I agree with. With the original show 'House' , one of the common things about all patients in the show was hiding the truth to the extreme, which isn't as common as it is shown. As a doctor, you don't just treat a disease ,you affirm your patient's belief in the medical professionals. Honestly, the number of times House gets it wrong in the show, he seems more like a quake. I hope mc doesn't get in this path of self destruction

honestly, knowing whitebeard, he'd try to go a middle ground ensuring survivability of maximum of his family members while ensuring maximum damage world government

man, the interactions are so awkward .

I'm not a fan of this . It feels like the story is deliberately trying to create an enemy of vishanti. It has been standard for Marvel magic users to use the power, and yet here is someone who doesn't want to pay the adequate price . It feels like a forcing situation where mc is trying to escape a good contract that fails and creates an enemy in vishanti . I really hope this is not the route this story takes, and the so-called price is actually logical to the overall story.

For a translation, this is a good read, Kudos to translator for making it readable. As for the story, I've read up to 20 chapters almost, and it has pretty much all classic mtl elements you can expect . You can divide all characters in three categories: girlfriend, bootlickers and enemies. Till now, we've encountered only bootlicker and enemies part, and judging by the direction story going ,it'd probably have girlfriends soon enough. I'll probably read it up to a few more chapters and drop it.But for other readers, if you haven't read an attribute type system stories with an op mc , go for it. It's still a better fanfic than most of the other fanfics here.

I always prefer a transmigration mc who has basic knowledge about the story rather than a religious fan of the stories.A mc who doesn't know much will tackle one trouble after another where a fan mc will go and beyond to save everyone which makes stories incredibly stale.

sheer cringe lord

borriiiinnng. This story makes it seems rose as some unbeatable character . Herpo had a thousand years and yet hadn't found a solution against six eyes ?? Doubtful. And she's basically toying with experienced fighters. I also thought this was a invasion. So where s the other invaders and why aren't they attacking?? it's getting extremely underwhelming

ded

what I don't understand is how the hell rose gets so strong if she's from the juggle world . She knows so much about red and blue and fighting, etc. I would have understood it if she was trained under dembledore

honestly, most people have something against him,it seems .

I'm curious , can cursed spirits be made into weapons like the God eaters weapons

meh, the way it's written, it feels like nothing has changed from the original story. Especially your mc feels nothing different because of transmigration .It seems like he's just replaced the og story, except for that everything's pretty much the same