Review Detail of DatBoiEraser in DXD Issei: The Mind of Games
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Original author here just to let everyone know that this is the original and isn’t being stolen. I am the person who made this story on Wattpad going by the name of Eraser-Boi-Dat.
DXD Issei: The Mind of Games
DatBoiEraser
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I fixed it… I noticed the issue and it was an issue with transferring it. Everything should be fine now.
ramon14680:Well I only read chapter one (which was fine) but chapter 2 to 15 were simply unreadable because they weren’t seperated into paragraphs. It was just one massive wall of text. So please edit/fix that
DatBoiEraser:I fixed it… I noticed the issue and it was an issue with transferring it. Everything should be fine now.
I’m not gonna leave a bad review but I only clicked on this because of the Aizen thumbnail and it’s just straight up misleading and the synopsis is vague so that didn’t help either but the point is got nothing to do with Aizen, not his smarts(mc can avoid a red flag for his life), grace( mc is a tank…) or abilities( again mc is a tank) the only thing that got in common is they both a male.
Hmmm… I’ll change the title picture then. I only chose the Aizen picture because it was another character with brown hair like Issei.
KILLER_Pineapple:I’m not gonna leave a bad review but I only clicked on this because of the Aizen thumbnail and it’s just straight up misleading and the synopsis is vague so that didn’t help either but the point is got nothing to do with Aizen, not his smarts(mc can avoid a red flag for his life), grace( mc is a tank…) or abilities( again mc is a tank) the only thing that got in common is they both a male.
KILLER_Pineapple:I’m not gonna leave a bad review but I only clicked on this because of the Aizen thumbnail and it’s just straight up misleading and the synopsis is vague so that didn’t help either but the point is got nothing to do with Aizen, not his smarts(mc can avoid a red flag for his life), grace( mc is a tank…) or abilities( again mc is a tank) the only thing that got in common is they both a male.
Unfortunately, it won’t be a harem. Any other woman besides the main love interest will just be a very good friend.
Azathoth2:harem?
DatBoiEraser:Unfortunately, it won’t be a harem. Any other woman besides the main love interest will just be a very good friend.
DatBoiEraser:Unfortunately, it won’t be a harem. Any other woman besides the main love interest will just be a very good friend.
DatBoiEraser:Unfortunately, it won’t be a harem. Any other woman besides the main love interest will just be a very good friend.
Author, I am going to give you a very important advice. Don't, ever, write a DxD fanfic without harem. The whole anime was popular because of that. If you wish to write a no harem fanfic chose a anime that doesn't have harem tag in it.
DatBoiEraser:Unfortunately, it won’t be a harem. Any other woman besides the main love interest will just be a very good friend.
that's not how it works, if my man doesn't want harem, then no harem it is. Also, even if it's not harem, what we should be caring as readers is if the story is readable and has a plot that can keep you on your toes. Anyways, hope author have a good run with this one.
Arnab_Panday:Author, I am going to give you a very important advice. Don't, ever, write a DxD fanfic without harem. The whole anime was popular because of that. If you wish to write a no harem fanfic chose a anime that doesn't have harem tag in it.
thats the charm in it, poeple want something new in a fanfic, if you write harem in a harem story, then why dont just watch the real show?
Arnab_Panday:Author, I am going to give you a very important advice. Don't, ever, write a DxD fanfic without harem. The whole anime was popular because of that. If you wish to write a no harem fanfic chose a anime that doesn't have harem tag in it.