Nice story, good story Interesting developments really, really loved your team for second selection But I hate your mc He's just so unnecessarily full of himself It pisses me off Here's just one example In their very first game he was chosen to play as the foal keeper That dunce decided that he won't make any effort at all and instead chose to sit down by the post and let 2 goals roll in without doing anything about it Then when he started playing and realised that Oh! my opponents actually won't just sit back and let me score he became all tensed and worried that he might actually lose You know what would have stopped him from being in danger of losing? Actually doing his damn job as a keeper Not only that he decided to play Itoshi Rin and somehow expected to win, like he didn't read the manga or something, then got pissed when he lost, dumbass Bo planning for his weapons, just bull-rushing it Anyway he has little forward thinking in my opinion

it's been 4 months You didn't stick to your promise 🤧

Dude, they are devils Cheating being against the pride of devils? bruh...

are you ever ever going to do a Dragonball fic? please ?!!

Bro when is super Saiyan 5 showing up? the tournament's starting to drag ngl

thanks for the chapter

why not use genjutsu though? I mean, with genjutsu he can easily pass across his experience when using the technique to enhance Sasuke's learning speed Add in the fact that he has an Eternal mangekyo sharingan the genjutsu should be more than real enough

Oh now he remembers he has Kai Kai

bruh this is dumb af

Author please give us the Chinese namelike type it out

you could charge a tailed beast bomb in the time it'd take to shout this out

I know I'm not the only one thinking this but can trunks just adapt already? I love kingdom/empire building as much as the next guy but seeing Trunks flounder about just doesn't fit his character. Heck if need be he can just make a wish on how to be a good emperor or something but please let's get past the whole "omg new empire what do" stage Apart from that loving this

I love your fic, really I do Just two issues for me really 1 the harem: I personally don't like harems, ever, they always ruin the flow of stories. Time that could have been spent on development is instead spent on the MC's girls. Then again it's a personal thing 2: The ease at which Vegeta allows said girls to join him on the battle field. It makes zero sense why he'd allow Bulma come so close to Frieza or Tights come so close to the cooler squadron, super Saiyan or not. It's just pointlessly careless fo me. Non-fighters have no business on the battlefield, just as he has no business in a laboratory Oh, and Bulma's mum? really? that's messed up dude

the same thing happened in dragon ball super, where Goku was a god No changes

I love the fact that finally a villain's actions have farther reaching effects than just a new transformation. Bojack in this case has warped the mentality of Yamcha, Vegeta, ruined the earth and the consequences will be far reaching for others. Really feels like an actual villain not just a stepping stone