this is bad the start was bad but then you put the prologue in chapter 3 then you wrote a fight scene out of nowhere just rewrite the story or drop the story it disrespectful to the flash and dc
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LIKEGunts92:it's normal, it's an author who is not one, who uses chat gpt to write for him. so the dialogues follow each other without any real reason.