a little short? haha apart from the last chapter (the 3rd) the other two are a joke. even if you write with an I made a real effort to write

Il cherche son amoureuse, mais il y a une indication de harem... je met une étoile pour le manque de sérieux Il cherche son amoureuse, mais il y a une indication de harem... je met une étoile pour le manque de sérieux

Une superbe idée, mal executé, une autre histoire au final inutile ou le heros de l'histoires n'est qu'un observateur de l'ombre et ne participe en rien au évènement trop occuper a se comporter en fan. si quelqu'un de plus compétent reprends l'idée ca serai super

your story cannot be found on your profile, if they had not given your nickname I would not have found your story

Am I misunderstood? he is reincarnated as a zombie who teaches students?

l'histoire est en 105 ac pas 290, pourquoi il y a une image de daenerys ? l'histoire est en 105 ac pas 290, pourquoi il y a une image de daenerys ? l'histoire est en 105 ac pas 290, pourquoi il y a une image de daenerys ?

tu tes tromper de destinataire

I would have started reading if it didn't mention harem

I would have read if the mc was a guy

great story but which will be ruined by a harem great story but which will be ruined by a harem great story but which will be ruined by a harem great story but which will be ruined by a harem

NO

the author wanted to do too much, it's indigestible, the system, the AI, the number of women under his command, the crazy amount of time spent on the system and the repetition on his skills, everything that's wrong in this kind of story is there. The combination makes it all like a Big Mac xxl version that we will never finish because we get tired of it very quickly to finish the fries if you understand me. and the use of serial character names no longer disgusts the reader

I was going to start reading, but I see that Ben Parker and Anthony Stark are writing for the mc? WHATTTT I'm going to forget this novel, too bad

36 chapitres pour qu'il obtienne son corps, mais l'histoire reste sur le canon sans aucun changement de scenario, a quoi bon regarder puisqu'ont a déjà vu la série.

A week ago I abandoned the story in tears and deleted it from my account, it was my wife who told me you were back. I'm not even happy at my level of frustration. I was on Patreon, but there's no way I'll resubscribe at the moment, I'm too angry... happy to be back despite everything, BUT ANGRY

it's normal, it's an author who is not one, who uses chat gpt to write for him. so the dialogues follow each other without any real reason.

There's no way I'd enjoy a fanfiction about this person, even if it makes them into a good person. I already find it horrible to make a series that glorifies criminals who exist, it's like the holy grail of evil that has been transformed and glorified. He is someone who should not be loved directly or indirectly.

Sunday translator, only read if you've had a bottle of alcohol! to avoid Sunday translator, only read if you've had a bottle of alcohol! to avoid

Sunday evening translator, only read if you've had a bottle of alcohol! to avoid

Eureka, I carly, NCIS LA, LIMITLESS