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InterPlanarGod
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sooo, I don't feel like reading this after finding out he's a demon, it's only a matter of time b4 he meets frieren. The moment that happens, he's going to get instantly zoltraak'd into oblivion. If you can't interact with the characters that are interesting, then whats the point?

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Transmigrated into the World of Frieren

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Amikiry
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Counter argument. Freeren usually doesn't attack first, at least in anime timeline. In fact, it seemed to me that she really likes to talk and provoke enemy into aggression. She attacked first only when she sensed a demon in the city and was afraid that people might get hurt.

Ash_Brittin
Ash_BrittinLv3Ash_Brittin

LOL

Edwin_ar1
Edwin_ar1Lv4Edwin_ar1

I am waiting for that

InLoveWithTheCold
InLoveWithTheColdLv1InLoveWithTheCold

Didn't you read it? So why are you here? (reviews area for story readers) I don't understand.

InterPlanarGod
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You said he was a demon in the description. that's an immediate death sentence upon meeting frieren. It's either wildly lore innacurate in which case I don't want to read it or he somehow avoids the literal main character for eternity in which case I don't want to read it. if the premise is bad I think it deserves the review.

InLoveWithTheCold:Didn't you read it? So why are you here? (reviews area for story readers) I don't understand.
InterPlanarGod
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You know what, when I have time I will read it. If you somehow find a lore-accurate way to prevent frieren from vaporizing him I'll keep reading and remove this review.

InLoveWithTheCold:Didn't you read it? So why are you here? (reviews area for story readers) I don't understand.
InterPlanarGod
InterPlanarGodLv13InterPlanarGod

It's true that she doesn't attack first, but ONLY for POWERFUL demons. She doesn't bother to use the "trick a demon" method in the source material for weak demons. for them it's kill on sight because there's no risk of collateral damage. In the source material she shot a demon in the brain with a concentrated yet accurate zoltrak in order to eliminate them as fast as possible. She didn't bother to trick it cus it wasn't necesary. go read the books first. then read the manga. the anime isn't far enough into the story yet for you to make that assertion.

Amikiry:Counter argument. Freeren usually doesn't attack first, at least in anime timeline. In fact, it seemed to me that she really likes to talk and provoke enemy into aggression. She attacked first only when she sensed a demon in the city and was afraid that people might get hurt.
Amikiry
AmikiryLv2Amikiry

That guy with the threads was weak no?

InterPlanarGod:It's true that she doesn't attack first, but ONLY for POWERFUL demons. She doesn't bother to use the "trick a demon" method in the source material for weak demons. for them it's kill on sight because there's no risk of collateral damage. In the source material she shot a demon in the brain with a concentrated yet accurate zoltrak in order to eliminate them as fast as possible. She didn't bother to trick it cus it wasn't necesary. go read the books first. then read the manga. the anime isn't far enough into the story yet for you to make that assertion.
Amikiry
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Although, yes, this novel is trash, I have managed to read it since I answered you. Although not for the reasons you said. I still want to read a good demon si. As of this book mc has already become a god or at least the strongest mortal in the world.

InterPlanarGod:It's true that she doesn't attack first, but ONLY for POWERFUL demons. She doesn't bother to use the "trick a demon" method in the source material for weak demons. for them it's kill on sight because there's no risk of collateral damage. In the source material she shot a demon in the brain with a concentrated yet accurate zoltrak in order to eliminate them as fast as possible. She didn't bother to trick it cus it wasn't necesary. go read the books first. then read the manga. the anime isn't far enough into the story yet for you to make that assertion.
InterPlanarGod
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That adds another reason to drop it. lol.

Amikiry:Although, yes, this novel is trash, I have managed to read it since I answered you. Although not for the reasons you said. I still want to read a good demon si. As of this book mc has already become a god or at least the strongest mortal in the world.
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Arima544
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God I hate when people post reviews without reading a word. The fanfic may not be great, but your actions are still unjustified

InterPlanarGod
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It's completely justified. when you claim your story is in the "frieren fandom" and then replace a main character trait of a vital character or main character with nonsense, then it isn't frieren anymore because you broke a rule of the setting. Amikiry also said that you broke a cardinal rule of power fantasy storytelling which is "A character cannot become "basically god" level of power without at least a lengthy character arc. according to them, you did it in 8 chapters. what the heck is with that? who would want to read something like that?

Arima544:God I hate when people post reviews without reading a word. The fanfic may not be great, but your actions are still unjustified
Random_Omnipotent
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Fr i mean therse's no way you can change frierens pov about demons unless the author make it so, the mc is definitely gonna get cooked when frieren see him 💀

Random_Omnipotent
Random_OmnipotentLv4Random_Omnipotent

what gonna happens

Random_Omnipotent:Fr i mean therse's no way you can change frierens pov about demons unless the author make it so, the mc is definitely gonna get cooked when frieren see him 💀
Random_Omnipotent
Random_OmnipotentLv4Random_Omnipotent

tho that makes it interesting so I'll guess I'll read it first

Random_Omnipotent:Fr i mean therse's no way you can change frierens pov about demons unless the author make it so, the mc is definitely gonna get cooked when frieren see him 💀
lordhokage
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thanks bro I HATE this kinda fics

Amikiry:Although, yes, this novel is trash, I have managed to read it since I answered you. Although not for the reasons you said. I still want to read a good demon si. As of this book mc has already become a god or at least the strongest mortal in the world.
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Discarded
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yeah MC its quite lore inaccurate. human in frieren world known has the fastest growing race in magic aptitude and yet the demon MC million times faster. there is also body transformation magic which change MC appearance to human which beg question why author makes mc demon if they transform him to human anyway. also the plot is rather heavy handed, in a chapter, a group of human and frieren bent on killing MC but they stop and become friendly in the next chapter. but its fanfic so low quality is expected. with so few frieren fanfic around, i think this is one of the better frieren fanfic despite its not that good. the other frieren fic is even worse, with frieren acting out of characters like shounen manga skit. i'm grateful that this fic is here despite all the flaw

Discarded
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forgot to mention that MC trying to save demon... the author and the MC is quite naive. it will be truly lorebreaking if the author makes demon become civil like human

nacht
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if you read until chapter 13, he did meet frieren and she attacked him, but he didn't die and the mc became somewhat of a friend with frieren.

Wade_Evans_6510
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….. that can’t work like at best one in a million demons have the self control to live in human society for an extended period of time and even then they’re still sociopaths

Discarded:forgot to mention that MC trying to save demon... the author and the MC is quite naive. it will be truly lorebreaking if the author makes demon become civil like human