Review Detail of Comicstorian in H.P: My Hogwarts Journey

Item: H.P: My Hogwarts Journey
Rating: 5

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ComicstorianAuthor2mthComicstorian

If anyone's wondering this is a translation, but don't worry it won't be machine translated I'm personally translating this story. hope y'all will still enjoy it but you don't have to worry, also I'm taking this translation very seriously since it's a learning experience for me as well.

H.P: My Hogwarts Journey

Comicstorian

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ChaddtsLv1Chaddts

The translation is not good enough at all. for instane brother-in-law. why was that used instead of the mans name? therre is a noticable lack of "her""he" and other pronouns where is would be natural. its frankly just bad.

2mth

Tylor_RoneyLv14Tylor_Roney

weird name for any child

2mth

ComicstorianAuthorComicstorian

Hahaha, yeah, but his first name reminds me of Bell from DanMachi.

2mth

estevaoLv4estevao

is there romance ?

2mth

AbeebaLv2Abeeba

please say that its a translation in the Synopsis

2mth

ekatnLv4ekatn

You're new to this, right?

Chaddts:The translation is not good enough at all. for instane brother-in-law. why was that used instead of the mans name? therre is a noticable lack of "her""he" and other pronouns where is would be natural. its frankly just bad.

2mth