is she ?? ii though Susan bones was more popular she was the one with the biggest chest of booty

why not train in the water it's best environment

yep.found it partially kissed hero on FF at like 103 chapters last updated 2012 like literally 12 years ago i remembered because i liked the story and when i got to last chapters and noticed last it was updated killed me and.from then on i checked the dates of any novel I read even if 90% get dropped anyways or barely thru first year after 100 chapters haha

I swear i have read this before. it was not completed but had more chapters then this are you stealing or rewrite cause it seems different but same maybe better word better

maybe have him be weaker then the 2 actually aged and powerful wizards but he has the potential to overshadow them but since he is so young and I think not even thru his third Magical growth if that's Canon. magic ages like fine wine so maybe make him strong but actually needs allies to beat and tag team the two greats. also unspeakables should dominate him too. so maybe make a new villain for after he beats the oldies maybe a secret society of people who want to dominate the world or devil worshipper cult who worship demons or the church has been raising their own wizards but brainwashed them to think it's gods gift and then have a war of faiths. maybe have harry potter take actual longer to defeat Voldemort and by like his 20 he finally kills him or have Voldemort notice his horcuxs being destroyed and leaves Britain and raising in less developed nations.

well for starters Naruto world is all about potential and bloodlines. look at orochimaru monster he could of become if he had the talent instead he lacked it and never gained it with all his experiments so if you give your mc the possibility of more chakra and bloodlines in the future then that's plot amour to the max.. his choice of one broken ability is Soo stupid. it's like hAving an op ability but no energy to use it akA chakra his talent is average he never will reach jounin let alone kage level power base and his broken ability is useless and at best maybe die if he uses it once. from chakra exhaustion. you should of just reincarnated him with no personal choice of picking and made him a good talent and decent chakra

Sasuke and Naruto's friendship was way too forced in my opinion so shika honestly iithink Kiba would suit Naruto's personality better but shika help with giving him some sense of self or common sense atleast lol

only reason he deserves this house is cause it's the house of idiots and rejects . never understood why people say Hufflepuff is house of the unwanted I always thought Gryffindor was that house that no one wants or less talented ones

meanwhile the big boat by the one person smart mc

yeah the worste teacher possible

the real question is the mc uselessly weak or just trying to get on Naruto's team

I'm confused he is doing everything to extend his life span just to waste months of it multiple times to heal himself

so he would let them kidnapped Hinata i don't understand why it would cause a war and be humiliated to the hokage and konaha

yeah I thought the story was the same one i read and was not completed

I hope that this story continues to the end. I want a story about HP and using other magics then just battle magic. imagine an army of golems or curse magic that weakens the enemy till they cure or figure away to defend themselves or runes crate traps or just uplift the magic world the the struggles of going against the norm. but it's always battle magic or bringing in other world anime powers that always kills stories in my opinion atleast .. best of luck on writing this and hope it sticks to runes. yes learn other magic but don't forget runes.

he is a water user htf is he going to become an alchemist

yeah I like the idea means he might have competition instead of steam rolling everything

people like you make me wonder if your secretly living with your parents in a basement or are actually a self made man with confidence and the achievements to back it. cause life sucks and most people are born into lower wage families and can not get out of this big no matter how easy people say it is. and that kills self confidence and gives low esteem

but why take them under him. unless he wants to become the next leader of pure blood ideology. if that's the case Susan and rose and Hermione and Luna are gonna no chance join him and will.be hostile to him. these families are deeply into pure blood ideology and to change that while their parents are alive telling them otherwise is unlikely

atleast pair them with girls who don't have animosity to each other