Review Detail of The_Drunkencrater in IKKY THE CHEATER
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Uhm.. You need to work on your writing a little more. It's good enough though, since I can at least follow the plot. But, simple mistakes as punctatuation, scene cuts, paragraphs, and pacing... It gives me the Ikk (Haha, see what I did there?) I do have to say though. You really do impressive on those updates! For readers like mtl readers, this might be a treasure trove!
IKKY THE CHEATER
Eldkazar
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ah, I see. makes sense now why it seems similar to thos machine translated stories. good luck!đ (check your forums)
Eldkazar:I started to publish it on spanish, but you know that it's not posibility of contract for non english novels now. I will improve, correct and enlarge my english writing skills, i'm on it. I thank so much any help, any review, even hard one. Thanks a lot to The_Drunkencrater
thks so much for wour review, i'm an spanish speaker then i have to translate my self to english and then correct the chapters one by one helped by an IAtranslator and my own knwoledge. Actually i will correct 3 chapter a day even i continue with updating a minimum of one chapter a day. It's hard with my first job schedule. I will correct asap i pomise