Eldkazar
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The truth is that I have enjoyed reading the chapters, very well written, but above all the maintenance of tension is very successful, and the reader does not have many clues at the moment about the world, or the situation in which the main character is. We will have to see and wait to see how the story develops, but for now it is very interesting.
thks so much for wour review, i'm an spanish speaker then i have to translate my self to english and then correct the chapters one by one helped by an IAtranslator and my own knwoledge. Actually i will correct 3 chapter a day even i continue with updating a minimum of one chapter a day. It's hard with my first job schedule. I will correct asap i pomise