The story is quite a feel good type but it feels more like a summary with some dialogue sprinkled in rather than a story narration.
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LIKEHmm, I agree with that, but I think I can explain that it's because I'm used to reading those long ahh novels, and I forgot that fanfics are not written that way. You know, the ones with extensive world-building and all those details. My chapters being shorter than them made me feel bad if I didn't justify what is happening or where he lives and all the details. However, I am improving on it. Thanks for the review. Oh, and after your feedback, I am now trying to make my chapters more narrative and less focused on summarizing or describing every detail.