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I_am_good_today2mthReplied to I_am_good_todayOh, and by this, I meant I can change the narrative or grammar, but not the observations or experiences I've written about. So, don't take it as disrespect or anything. Anyways, thanks for the comment.
But before he got to Gia, he noticed she is already looking heartbroken. He panicked and hugged her, asking, "What happened, Gia?"- I_am_good_today2mthReplied to Galactic_Sugar
Are you sure? Do you have a cousin or sister? (Genuine question.) I have seen many people do this—kids use many tactics to get attention or things they want. I have personally taken care of a cousin myself for quite a while during her early age, so I tried to write it based on that experience and what I have observed. However, if it looks weird this time, I can't help it.
But before he got to Gia, he noticed she is already looking heartbroken. He panicked and hugged her, asking, "What happened, Gia?" - I_am_good_today2mthCommentedCh 275 -270- Zeri and Seraphine
- I_am_good_today2mthReplied to Tushar_kumar_5812Ch 31 Chapter-31: Popular Gia
- I_am_good_today3mthReplied to lamortnoir974
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Note : - Well, I will switch between Gia and Giya for her as one is her nickname and other is her name. - I_am_good_today3mthReplied to soldklad
I started changing everything from colony to community after writing later chapters but forgot some places. Thanks for the reminder.
This paragraph has been deleted. - I_am_good_today3mthReplied to soldklad
I meant not overpowered and also somewhat restrictive, not that it wouldn't be useful.
[Ding] It works on mobile and computer, and you can create a server for it where it can store the data you collect and filter it out to give you the best result you can get through the internet. It can also develop with time, learn, progress, and you can upgrade it and add new elements. - I_am_good_today3mthReplied to soldklad
Sorry for the late reply; I was busy these days. Anyway, the story is more like an easy-to-understand extract I wrote because it might get boring if I write too much and too complex for a light novel. I just created some pieces as the premises of the story I have thought isn't the same and isn't finished yet. Anyway, thanks for the reply.
After coming out of his room, Jim met Gia going downstairs too. - I_am_good_today3mthReplied to JussMonty
Some teachers use these punishments to motivate students to improve, while others are just ash_ holes. I remember getting a light hit on the back from a teacher when I was cursing at my friend, and by mistake, that teacher heard it. Its good that I was in the crowd and teacher didn't see my face, or he just ignored it.
Haley continued with, "You bi, bi... beach," as she bobbed her head to look like someone suggesting going to the beach, which made her friend and Jim snicker, while everyone else felt disappointed, even the teachers seems disappointed, which made Haley's eyes twitch. It seemed even the teachers thought of her as trouble and were eager to punish her. - I_am_good_today3mthReplied to JussMonty
Oh! Is that true? In my case, arriving early allows you to find many teachers walking in. If you arrive a little later, sometimes you can find some teachers wandering near the garden until classes start. I used my high school as a reference so I added that.
"What? What the hell? Get that stupid brain out of the gutter. He is my friend, you bi...," Haley stopped mid-sentence from her sudden outburst and noticed teachers around looking at her again. Students were waiting for her to curse and hoping for some drama on the first day, but she was clever as she controlled herself. - I_am_good_today3mthReplied to Ashish_Kumar_1835
Hmm, I agree with that, but I think I can explain that it's because I'm used to reading those long ahh novels, and I forgot that fanfics are not written that way. You know, the ones with extensive world-building and all those details. My chapters being shorter than them made me feel bad if I didn't justify what is happening or where he lives and all the details. However, I am improving on it. Thanks for the review. Oh, and after your feedback, I am now trying to make my chapters more narrative and less focused on summarizing or describing every detail.
- I_am_good_today3mthReplied to CCAAPP
Hahaha, you brought back some old memories, my guy.
"Jimmy, how do you write this?" she asked. - I_am_good_today3mthReplied to Bonbonbla
I am keeping it slow-paced, so I can't include many conversations at the start. Also, me being a newbie is also a contributing to this.
And then, he was done with uploading the story, going to sleep after informing his mom. Instead of just sleeping, it was a continuation of his progress in learning the skill. He repeated this routine for the first three days. His only schedule included doing holiday work assigned by the school, aiming to complete that holiday work in the next 15 days. Alongside this, he continued writing the story and learning the skill. He also spent time playing with Gia, who became quite active after learning that her brother had written a story. - I_am_good_today3mthReplied to Dark_Dath_horse
Well, man, I can say DC, Marvel, and many other things follow the same route. So, saying things containing anything supernatural can also be DC. Here, the MC is the only one, so not really DC. But, if we compare, then we can find at least one thing in real life similar to anything that exists in novels because the ideas we take for novels are all derived from read world, even if it contains 1% of similarity.
At the top was a particularly famous robot anime that caught his attention. In this series, a guy's mind was transferred into a robot, and his life unfolded in a world where aliens, Atlanteans, and many other fantastical elements were real. The uniqueness and creativity of this anime fascinated him, opening up a whole new realm of entertainment in this unfamiliar world. The way it portrayed the anime was exceptionally well-done, and it also had accompanying manga. But now he has the content he can use to get money, as well as he can use the popular series from his world to get famous in this world. - I_am_good_today3mthReplied to natsudesai
AI as in what he made, like a dumb down version like a voice assistant for mobile from the actual one. Voice assistants for mobile and all are easy to make then an AI. You can check the chapter where he tweaked with AI to make this version for personal use and for his friends. Do you really think he will use the real one here.
This is how the night in Jim's house passed—a little sad, a little angry, but mostly showcasing the strong bond between brother and sister, making it easier to get through. - I_am_good_today3mthCommentedCh 608 C608 The Surfer Arrives
- I_am_good_today3mthReplied to AMASIUQ
Need to research on those before adding them in chapters. So, might take some time. If you have some time can you give me an overview on it, so I can know more about this Hamilton: The musical video. Anyways, Thanks for suggestion.
Ch 25 Chapter-25: End of Holidays(5) - I_am_good_today3mthReplied to Lucifer_Dragneel
Hm, could be true, but, from my perspective it could be also true that Americans have or most American have habit of calling their brother and sister just with name, so if any different way to call them is used while its also motioning that novel mc's life taking place is in America, they make an image on how it would go, and get disappointed. I don't think its Chinese novel reason because, Chinese novels use junior and senior prefix with brother and sister, so its not that (from my p.o.v.).
But, before Jim could explain, Luke, for some reason, tried to be the big guy and sacrifice his chance, saying, "Bro Jim, you can use Gia's draft. I will try for your new story," looking at me with a sad face. - I_am_good_today3mthReplied to InterPlanarGodCh 4 Chapter 4: Research