Review Detail of _Pochitalover_ in In Marvel As Dante
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Totally nerfed Dante stuck in stupid situations, a slow plot, stupid main character with a nasty personality and random events. Recommendations: Get everything out of the way that is of no interest (anything to do with SHIELD, Hydra and other government organization nonsense, if you put a Devil May Cry character in Marvel you don't put him in those situations, it's stupid). Give the protagonist a personal goal (he wanders around the story totally aimlessly and killing people, generic edgy, even Dante from DmC: Devil May Cry has more personality, which at first seems impossible). Increase the strength of the protagonist being faithful to the original character (In the most recent chapter the protagonist was afraid of Wolverine, WOLVERINE, ONE OF THE WEAKEST X MEN, even the weakest version of Dante with no arms and terminal cancer easily destroys Wolverine). Give more structure to the plot (everything is very random, there is no defined arc and characters come out of nowhere that in the next one don't appear again and plots are opened that remain later in the air).
In Marvel As Dante
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Yeah, it's not worth it, I keep reading it to keep my habit of reading the first 30 chapters of a story so I can leave knowing it's not going to get any better at any point, but I'm currently on chapter 21 and it's going nowhere, long update times (between 2 to 3 days) for short chapters that advance absolutely nothing in the plot, basically a fly trap for a few fools to consume the author's patreon and keep releasing countless short chapters that advance nothing, only interactions between marvel characters with the protagonist that are very long and not very entertaining.
Solare_The_Second:Thanks for the warning dude, even the weakest version of Dante rolls through Wolverine no diff.
