Review Detail of PsionicMind in Astral Merchant
Review detail
Just following traditions but there will always be room for improvement as an author. Firstly, I would like to say that the first few chapters lack action so I hope you stick with it for a while. Here is what you can expect from this book: Anti-Hero and Villain: He is a complex character who can be both based on the world he is in and the situation. Overpowered: Weak at the start if we consider stats but he becomes strong pretty fast so I decided that OP suited this better than weak to strong. Magic: Will be introduced on Earth and refined in the other worlds. System: Larcen is kind of a system administrator but with perks over the shop only. Cultivation: Like Magic. Will be introduced on Earth and refined in other worlds. Transmigration: This was the tag that came closest to how diving works. If you have any questions or if you want me to make an Auxiliary chap for something specific, just ask me.
Astral Merchant
PsionicMind
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do you have any recommendations for shops novels or novels where the shop owner ist also a streamer, maybe?
UnKnownEntity001:Is the shop the main focus of the story? So many “shop” novel only focus on being an actual shop owner for only a few chapter.
As for what is the main focus of the story... consider the shop like a system in the system novels. The shop will stay until the end. ||Minor Spoilers|| * He will travel to different worlds. * The shop in the first world is an upgraded version as it merged with the Tower of Hope. * The shop in the other worlds will be true to its form unless it merges with another tower. (The choice of merging will be in Larcen's hands) * The currency power/value will change in different worlds based on a few factors like type and quality of energy, tier of the planet, etc.
UnKnownEntity001:Is the shop the main focus of the story? So many “shop” novel only focus on being an actual shop owner for only a few chapter.
PsionicMind:As for what is the main focus of the story... consider the shop like a system in the system novels. The shop will stay until the end. ||Minor Spoilers|| * He will travel to different worlds. * The shop in the first world is an upgraded version as it merged with the Tower of Hope. * The shop in the other worlds will be true to its form unless it merges with another tower. (The choice of merging will be in Larcen's hands) * The currency power/value will change in different worlds based on a few factors like type and quality of energy, tier of the planet, etc.
Harem - YesBig - Depends on what your definition of big is so I hope you can tell give me a number estimate so I can confirm
Karyk:Will this be harem and will it be big ?
PsionicMind:Harem - YesBig - Depends on what your definition of big is so I hope you can tell give me a number estimate so I can confirm
Since he will travel between worlds, will he bring his har*m with him or there will be long separations?
PsionicMind:Yes
He can bring everyone to his main planet, AKA Xonus. But he cannot take everyone with him to dive into other planets. There will be some exceptions so only some of his wives will be able to travel with him.
FallenAngeI:Since he will travel between worlds, will he bring his har*m with him or there will be long separations?
And how long will the separations be? (approx. chapters). I am not a fan of novels where it happens all the time and he is alway for longer then he is together with them.
PsionicMind:He can bring everyone to his main planet, AKA Xonus. But he cannot take everyone with him to dive into other planets. There will be some exceptions so only some of his wives will be able to travel with him.
[Spoiler Alert].............It will happen once actually. He won't travel to too many worlds as that will make this book have 3k chapters and I don't think I can write so much. I don't want to spoil too much but I haven't given it too much of a thought either so all I can say is that the separation will happen once and that separation will be long. Hundreds of chapters even but that's just for the MC. As for his lovers, only a few years would pass.
FallenAngeI:And how long will the separations be? (approx. chapters). I am not a fan of novels where it happens all the time and he is alway for longer then he is together with them.
Hmm, I don't know if it's for me then. Might give it a chance later on. Good luck with the novel tho
PsionicMind:[Spoiler Alert].............It will happen once actually. He won't travel to too many worlds as that will make this book have 3k chapters and I don't think I can write so much. I don't want to spoil too much but I haven't given it too much of a thought either so all I can say is that the separation will happen once and that separation will be long. Hundreds of chapters even but that's just for the MC. As for his lovers, only a few years would pass.
FallenAngeI:Hmm, I don't know if it's for me then. Might give it a chance later on. Good luck with the novel tho
Aro01:it's good that his harem won't travel every time with him and that there will be long separations. so that the reader can enjoy the life of the mc and not always be distracted with 5 harem members, which is already much regardless. I like the synopsis and give it a try.
Junni_MC:The novel is very good, but I have a question: How did you edit the cover?
I didnt think it was necessary buy I guess I have to do it. Which illustrations would you like? The MC and female leads would be enough right?
MeMyself0402005:Author, are there character illustrations?
Hey, I'm good with just having illustrations for the MC and Female Leads at the moment. But if there's a demand from more readers for illustrations of support characters, I'm totally open to that too. Thanks a bunch for considering it
PsionicMind:I didnt think it was necessary buy I guess I have to do it. Which illustrations would you like? The MC and female leads would be enough right?