Review Detail of zak_moe_5413 in A Strange Crossover
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Yikes, this is so bad. The grammar and spelling, even the synopsis, are terrible. Please fix it. You will not get people to read this if you don't make corrections
A Strange Crossover
Iamwhatagain
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haven't read the story yet but the synopsis is way too long and even after reading it I had no idea this was a marvel dc crossover until I read the note. try and shorten it one to two paragraphs max and don't waste time with flowery words. people only care about where the story takes place and the basic background info for the MC you can get into his past or goals in the actual story.
Iamwhatagain:Mind sharing some issues, I am willing to fix. Try to be specific. Thanks
True. If author makes a synopsis objectively peopke will show more interest. Right now looks like he tried to make it look like one a publishing company would do. But that don't work here. Here, best way is to almost list what the story has and is. Like bullet points
Mistaken_Smile:haven't read the story yet but the synopsis is way too long and even after reading it I had no idea this was a marvel dc crossover until I read the note. try and shorten it one to two paragraphs max and don't waste time with flowery words. people only care about where the story takes place and the basic background info for the MC you can get into his past or goals in the actual story.
agreed. the synopsis is way too formal. some people won't even understand some of the words you put. that'll just make em more confused. this is not high school where you need to lengthen your essay by putting some fancy words. this is fanfiction, people read it if it's interesting. grammar comes after that.
Lc_The_Second:True. If author makes a synopsis objectively peopke will show more interest. Right now looks like he tried to make it look like one a publishing company would do. But that don't work here. Here, best way is to almost list what the story has and is. Like bullet points
Iamwhatagain:Mind sharing some issues, I am willing to fix. Try to be specific. Thanks