Review Detail of nekrom1 in Necromancer of the End Times
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well, I will give my novel five stars because I think I deserve it, this is my second novel while I am still writing my first story, so read it and tell me how is it, I will keep updating at least 5 to 6 chapters a week or more if I have the free time, thank you for reading.
Necromancer of the End Times
nekrom1
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nekrom1:ohh, if anyone has any questions they can ask me too.
well, right now it has action and adventure but If I were to add the romance it will only be one or two.
Khaleel_Rahman_5138:any romance ? or purely adventure and action?
As far as I have read this, this is good. You can add a lot of things for example, you can that the world they merged with has already a number of factions existing, and quite strong, talk about alliances etc. , and maybe have the MC also think of creating his own stronghold, have his own faction of real peeps, etc. add some more lore liek in the legendary mechanic(try creating something unique for bonus points, liek not mythical gods liek zeus or indra etc.)
abrarmalik099:As far as I have read this, this is good. You can add a lot of things for example, you can that the world they merged with has already a number of factions existing, and quite strong, talk about alliances etc. , and maybe have the MC also think of creating his own stronghold, have his own faction of real peeps, etc. add some more lore liek in the legendary mechanic(try creating something unique for bonus points, liek not mythical gods liek zeus or indra etc.)
nekrom1:well, right now it has action and adventure but If I were to add the romance it will only be one or two.
as soon as I got so far it almost exact copy of "the necromancer alone" there is slight changes like the girl is his sister instead of neibour and the dude he found later is just a random one instead of best friend. he also don't make undead from humans he also meet army guys shreaded by goblins. I was reading it and head a dejavu.