abrarmalik099
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In the list you wrote talent trading is put on the 2nd place. while here you've mentioned its 3rd
As far as I have read this, this is good. You can add a lot of things for example, you can that the world they merged with has already a number of factions existing, and quite strong, talk about alliances etc. , and maybe have the MC also think of creating his own stronghold, have his own faction of real peeps, etc. add some more lore liek in the legendary mechanic(try creating something unique for bonus points, liek not mythical gods liek zeus or indra etc.)
boss can you give the raw name for Worldwide Lord Transformation: Becoming Invincible Without Cheats?
what specific rule? dear translator
his*
then that concept is fake.
even a novel knows
hahahaha
by good manners, I meant not being childish(which the OP said). So I meant that by becoming wise you're at least not childish
I don't know what you mean by wise, but being wise also translates into good manners as well
by he, does the author refer to Fenrir or Michael?
The only review I have done on this website, was about the novel, Global Lord: 100% drop one. The difference between them is that this has far better and clearer mechanics. and the stats of the troops, type of troops are all more thoroughly thought about. Except for the meh Character Design, this would have been a very good novel.
Still no change