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the_black_gift
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This novel is just trash. I'm only at chapter 5 and already there are many issues. 1. The protagonist is stupid. He is greedy for progress and careless, taking completely unneeded risks. Additionally he has one skill and and hesitates to put his points into it in a life and death situation. I would say he is as intelligent as my 10 year old self. Truly pathetic. 2. The system is already inconsistent. He suddenly has more energy points than in the last chapter. I repeat, this was chapter 5. 3. There is zero world-building. Only his room, sister and brother get a description, everything else just is. He way as well live in a world made out of cardboard. Conclusion: I have read better novels I have rated 1 star. This is a zero star novel. At least it in a fantasy setting and likely won't have racism. Making it a part of the bottom 1% of novels I've read, but not a contender for worst novel ever. I bet 20 bucks most, if not all, of those 5 star reviews are bought.

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Unstoppable Martial Arts: Starting from Attribute Points Allocation

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tenlegsssss
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try reading my novel Skill Hacking In A Fantasy World, it’s only two chapters but give it a chance when u got the time, thanks!