the story so far is decent. There are a few corrections needing to be made like character names but if someone where to edit this and format it could actually be a very popular story
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and the corrections to some of the Asian phrases needs to be adjusted since it's written in a mtl format
Sadly that is a big thing for most translation, even those done well, which most are not, have very similar... plot lines that quickly become boring.
harem , no harem ???
no harem, he go with Gwen. I finished the book.
Leon_Luis_:harem , no harem ???