Review Detail of Gabichu_Yeah in One Piece : Earning One Trillion Berries Before Retiring

The writing style of this fanfic is horrible, one of the worst I've read in a webnovel, it uses (brackets) to express the emotions of the characters, there is no basic flow in the plot and dialogues, it seems that the MC is talking to an NPC from a game with bad dialogues. Really is a pain for the eyes read this fanfic