Its good enough for time pass but other than that even on the logic basis (fantasy or any other logic included), this novel is not that good, women or MCs harem are 2d and act brainlessly and are cringey to say the least... MC is a rapist who puts the blame on super soldier serum side effects and author makes those raped women act like they cant live without him... And MC is also very arrogant without backing of proper individual or organizational power... Author makes MC do bad things but gaslights it as MC doing a favor on others.... Overall if you get bored of the novel like me, there are metric fu*k tons of bad points of this novel but then again from first chapter onwards author also doesnt hide his/her wish fullfillment in this novel Byt bottomline is i am bored of this novel and for above mentioned points - 3/5 stars

Super unreliable author... One chapter says he became god and then next chapter says he has yet to become a god One chapter has one set of number related to his faith points creation and what not but in the next chapter the numbers are changed. For eg - In one chapter, MC says he got 200 galaxy origin point but in the next chapter author changes it to 20 galaxy origin points for no reason. There is no description or explanation on what kind of system MC has, what are its capabilities, limitations and other stuffs... MC doesnt utilize his powers properly, 98% of his divine domain is empty which he could buy and fill with devout believers and in return get large amount of faith points everyday from them which acts like a currency... The divine domain concept and what goes in it is super vague and almost non existant... There are many more abnormalities, in addition after chapter 100, this novel becomes unreadable as previous chapter ending and preset chapter beginning are different and unlinked and feels like missing context... Overall I would not recommend reading this novel and if you want a time pass then read until chapter 80 and drop it, not worthwhile to waste brain cells and time on waste chapters after that... Again this is a shit typical chinese novel

This is clearly a wish fulfillment novel with cliche and logicless element... Super OP MC... Fine, too much OP compared to others but still... Fine. but whats up with a crevice opening in his house and his cheap rental house being fine, when monster mages are firing fireballs and icicle arrows and 6-7 heavy duty monsters are fighting recklessly with weapons? Are you saying the house is fine even with all this and there are no neighbours complaining or inquiring about the noise? WTF? How can you leave such an obvious logic hole for no reason?? Moreover maybe because MC is too OP or whatever, this novel from the beginning itself looses much value and interesting charisma for me not to mention the typical chinese xianxia moves as skills like golden bell and indestructible body nonsense makes it too much for me to read this, atleast come up with good enough skill names and dont just copy paste the ages old used in million novel moves... Well I cant continue reading this but if you can ignore the above mentioned reasons, you may be able to read this novel and for many may even be good read... Too bad this is not my cup of tea

Managed to read until chapter 721, couldnt go pass it after one of MC's sub base got destroyed and he had no reaction to it... One sec he is angry for all deaths caused in his sub base, next moment he is craftily trying to recruit another blacksmith... Author always writes in a way like when a mistake is made, its never MCs fault, rathereveryone comes to him and says like - you did good and it was not in your hands... MC doesnt take things seriously and is extremely apathetic to situations... His mentality is like oh that enemy harmed my forces, kill him... Oh he ran away then forget it, letsmove on to our next agenda... An enemy force has been encroaching on them but even if he knows it, he acts like whatever am busy with other things, too lazy to pursue them, let others handle it and consequence? One of his own orgs base stations got done in... I hate these kinda novels with irresponsible MCs

Its readable and is okay for passing time but personally i think this novel is not that good... No goals for MC, he is just developing his planet without any goal of whats the use of developing planet, what powers does it give you? The planet development is just a trash replication of nonsense great xia kingdom and almost similar to what earth has gone through... Many things are different in MCs nurtured world and with his nonsense no manipulation and free reign given for natural evolution of planet, somehow the world and its people follow the route of ancient china, from name to special event like 3 kingdom and everything... There are only minor differences and add-ons These things are still fine but sheer audacity of the author to waste readers time with overly filler chapters filled with unimportant mob talks are disgusting.. Like MCs gives and exam and 10 minutes later this exams result would be shown to public but somehow author thought its good thing to strech these 10 mins unimaginably to 15-25 chapters filled with some no name so called geniuses' flattery, fake humility and flattery filled speculation and bootlicking nonsense... From these i knew that the competion will be stretched for 150-200 chapters unreasonably by the author for no fucking good reason... I am done with this trash novel, i hate it when author waste time unreasonably with trash talks and mob discussions which has no utter short or long term benefit or relation to the novel's plot and then repeating this type of narrative again and again... Atlast interesting concept but read at your own risk but I for one am super frustrated by this novel

This is an ALMOST copy of canon events... MCs entry with rick from the very beginning would have logically created a super storm from very beginning itself if you go by the butterfly effect... But here MC is just a non-biting mindless zombie following rick, minimal dialogues between MC and rick, minimal productive input for ideas by MC in case of some canonical events, most of the actions are executed by rick and again MC just follows along dumbly... Nevermind... Am dropping this after chapter 10, no motivation to further read what i have already watched in a better version of this

Lol you dont get free stuffs and call that a shop... Its not a shop then, its just your inventory...

Rick does all the actions original to canon with no difference except for a living breathing human beside him, 1 year in soltitude for MC where he only trained and 1st time seeing Rick,the main character(probably why he choose the walking dead world) and except for one or two sentence dialogue, there is nothing else? Whats up with completely ignoring the butterfly effect of MCs sheer existence and MC being showcased as cheap emotionless pixel character? No pixel characters atleast show emojis... Not liking how this story is being written with only some modification to canon series... But its only in initial phase, so will continue

So he lost consciousness AGAIN? Thats pretty lame

Dont like MCs character settings and as for the system, except for the so called random lottery that gave him power, rest there is not an iota of system here... Andits dumb how multiple waves of spies just tried the same way again and again and died in waves... Pretty nonsensical point, they are ninjas, if nothing else, they should have got the mission to try and kill him since capturing isnt working... Anyway dont like this novel

I basically didnt read any of it after trash level introductory chapter and skipped to chapters that i felt interesting and they were extremely few.... You should understand that a normal system in a trash's hand can make him genius, yet after getting a god level system, MC still cant fight like shit! Even against his own batch mates he can barely put up a spar and when he is in combat, getting his body RANSACKED by random hobos, his attacks that follow the most overpowered route in combat i.e. full attack zero defence backed by 10000* healing regeneration and a system, gets blocked by some def armor, some guy's instinct, some guy's -every fucking time- last second dodge to minimize injury... All i can say is this is a C U N T of a novel with slut level MCs and characters... Fking waste of brain cells

Dont worry man, he probably has no way of saying how he got the money since he would need to show his 2nd level citizen identity and by link he may have to expose his feat of creating evo path that is so popular and may induce unwanted and malicious attraction... All in time but I do support your claim of giving his family security

Does Webnovel report function doesnt work? I am pretty sure many would have reported it... But then webnovel never cared about these stuffs... Honestly this should be in fanfic section if it isnt published by original author

Interesting novel but not interesting enough for me to unlock chapters from chapter 15 to 200+ to read a generic concept albeit modified... MC has presence of mind but not enough to keep doing random stuffs that gets him exposed not to mention this novel has a chinese author which means there is as high as 85% chance that this novel will include heavy nationalistic mindset and random young master nonsense... So the investment of unlocking chaps is not worth it for this novel...

I can tell author is trying his best to balance everything and make story interesting but all the stuffs like nerfing of power, MCs over acting on every single one of the situations and some other instances are just dampening my interest for this fan fic... Maybe am not the right audience for this fan fic... Anyway wish you best of luck with this fan fic, Author

Lots of use of emotions, every single dialogue has emotions written in bracket, like Nami(angry) : dialogue Kahn(intrigued) : dialogue So on and so forth... Never seen a narrative like that and dont like it one bit... It breaks immersion and is just straight up annoying ngl. Not to mention the pace and story is all over the place, one time, the MC is talking about old days, his dissapointment, his justice and then the very next second he does stuff or monologues about how to profit off of his justice Anyway dropping the fanfic

Seconded, my exact thoughts!

Lots of emotions like kahn(confused) and sly smile and other such description alongside switching between first person monologue and third person narrative is messing up the immersion...

This is a new concept and until meeting carol, the story was very interesting like how his 12 familiars guarded the timeline and stuff, but then everything went downhill, well the "everything" here refers to him ONLY trying to woo carol and nothing else, dont know about others, but for me it became super boring

"Life is going well for bruce wayne", for some reason that line gave me minor chills, major one for main character i think lol