No offense but I don't see this going far you could've used the Deva path as a medium to give him full gravity manipulation then you can limit the others but now you've limited his growth by alot Not saying he should be op straight up immediately but at least we would know that along the line he'll grow more powerful
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LIKEStory_Teller_229:Well I would have answered you but that would be a major spoiler. If you don't mind, try to give it a read even if you don't like it. I bet you would be surprised in the near future.
You could leave those clues in the chapters, you would save review-style comments. I haven't read it yet to clarify, just a cheeky recommendation from someone who has a lot of free time
Story_Teller_229:Well I would have answered you but that would be a major spoiler. If you don't mind, try to give it a read even if you don't like it. I bet you would be surprised in the near future.
Gabichu_Yeah:You could leave those clues in the chapters, you would save review-style comments. I haven't read it yet to clarify, just a cheeky recommendation from someone who has a lot of free time
I ended up dropping for very similar reasons and if you donāt mind me asking how has it been doing?
DARKSLORDFROST:Hmm intriguing Alright then I'll follow you till the end š¤š¼
Propht:I ended up dropping for very similar reasons and if you donāt mind me asking how has it been doing?