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daylightmoon123445
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You're the kind of person to say 'Uhu this is my first book' and write a magnum opus. 不不 All I wanted to say is that your book is worthy of each and every view it got, and that your descriptions are good(aah, I'm jealous). I like your characters, your story and your writing quality. Style is ok, but that doesn't bother me much. Though, I'm not that content with your synopsis, you could always better it with some editing :) Kudos to you author! (I have suggested a rewritten version of your synopsis with the help if AI in the comment section down below. Do refer it if you prefer to make some changes).

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Way Back To Neverland

InkDreamer07

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daylightmoon123445
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you're welcome. I'm just glad if I helped. Beginning aspiring authors need all the support and feedback we can receive!

InkDreamer07
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hahah yeah its my first book , thank you for your helpful review and also thank you for thy edited synopsis I am going to use it

InkDreamer07
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daylightmoon123445
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a cotton factory town, Asher Blackwood and Henry Williams find themselves caught up in a series of strange events. Suspicion falls on the mysterious entity known as Neverland, leading to a devastating catastrophe. Desperate for answers and justice, they seek refuge in the enigmatic realm of EverGreen. In EverGreen, they encounter the enigmatic Yuan Xhin, a master of magic. Asher discovers his ability to control black flames, while Henry possesses the power to heal. Driven by their desire for revenge against Neverland, the duo embarks on thrilling adventures alongside magical creatures. Amidst their quest, Asher finds himself captivated by Alexia Grey, a remarkable individual who lacks magical abilities. Their connection grows as they navigate the wonders of a magical festival, where Asher hones his powers and unravels the secrets of his own past. However, tragedy strikes when Alexia meets a devastating fate, plunging Asher into grief and turmoil. As he delves deeper into the mysteries surrounding him, shocking revelations come to light. What lies ahead for Asher and the secrets he uncovers? Brace yourself for a captivating journey of love, loss, and unexpected twists."

daylightmoon123445
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srry that was the original, srry I was a little confused. I deleted and reposted it. Can you see it?

InkDreamer07:this is edited ?
InkDreamer07
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no its not showing now

daylightmoon123445:srry that was the original, srry I was a little confused. I deleted and reposted it. Can you see it?
InkDreamer07
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thank you

daylightmoon123445: a cotton factory town, Asher Blackwood and Henry Williams find themselves caught up in a series of strange events. Suspicion falls on the mysterious entity known as Neverland, leading to a devastating catastrophe. Desperate for answers and justice, they seek refuge in the enigmatic realm of EverGreen. In EverGreen, they encounter the enigmatic Yuan Xhin, a master of magic. Asher discovers his ability to control black flames, while Henry possesses the power to heal. Driven by their desire for revenge against Neverland, the duo embarks on thrilling adventures alongside magical creatures. Amidst their quest, Asher finds himself captivated by Alexia Grey, a remarkable individual who lacks magical abilities. Their connection grows as they navigate the wonders of a magical festival, where Asher hones his powers and unravels the secrets of his own past. However, tragedy strikes when Alexia meets a devastating fate, plunging Asher into grief and turmoil. As he delves deeper into the mysteries surrounding him, shocking revelations come to light. What lies ahead for Asher and the secrets he uncovers? Brace yourself for a captivating journey of love, loss, and unexpected twists."
daylightmoon123445
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welcome~

InkDreamer07
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I am not able to copy it

daylightmoon123445: a cotton factory town, Asher Blackwood and Henry Williams find themselves caught up in a series of strange events. Suspicion falls on the mysterious entity known as Neverland, leading to a devastating catastrophe. Desperate for answers and justice, they seek refuge in the enigmatic realm of EverGreen. In EverGreen, they encounter the enigmatic Yuan Xhin, a master of magic. Asher discovers his ability to control black flames, while Henry possesses the power to heal. Driven by their desire for revenge against Neverland, the duo embarks on thrilling adventures alongside magical creatures. Amidst their quest, Asher finds himself captivated by Alexia Grey, a remarkable individual who lacks magical abilities. Their connection grows as they navigate the wonders of a magical festival, where Asher hones his powers and unravels the secrets of his own past. However, tragedy strikes when Alexia meets a devastating fate, plunging Asher into grief and turmoil. As he delves deeper into the mysteries surrounding him, shocking revelations come to light. What lies ahead for Asher and the secrets he uncovers? Brace yourself for a captivating journey of love, loss, and unexpected twists."