aww thank you love I really appreciate you :) I am proud to call you a fan <3

Hey, the author here! Make sure to leave a review if you liked this story :) This is a run-in-the-mill kind of story that I loved writing. Big fan of the chills and thrills so I decided to write one myself ;)

sooo...you're not mad?

Hi Mauritany_DL, Thank you for taking the time to read my story and chapter notes to share your thoughts. Firstly, I didn’t mean to demean you in any way , and I appreciate feedback even when it’s critical, it helps me grow as a writer. Secondly, it’s not a test as I had earlier commented, it was an exam, finals, and unfortunately, tuition, studying, extracurriculars, and projects took up most of my time. I woke up at 5 and slept at midnight, so I don’t think it was good or even healthy to keep writing. A sacrifice was all it was, but I’m here now and that is what matters to me most 😊 I'm sorry to hear that you didn't enjoy this part of the story. Writing is a journey, and I'm always looking to improve. If there's specific constructive feedback you could share, I'd love to hear it so I can better understand what didn't work for you. I do need to apologize to you because all your comments seemed a little backhanded and I didn’t quite catch it, it was a fault on my part, so I sincerely apologize if it came on you the wrong way. Don’t get me wrong, but I think a real writer loves writing for the sake of writing, and I’m writing for the sake of writing, so maybe I am a writer. And I’m going to keep writing, for the sake of writing. I know you don’t like my writing, content, and direction of the story, but writing is an art and a form of expression, so I understand that it might not be to everyone’s taste, but it’s part of the creative process. I hope you find other works that you enjoy more, and if you have any other recommendations or constructive suggestions, I’m open to them. Best regards, Daylightmoon

Hey he's an emotional young man, stop bullying him 😤😤😂😏

Oh yeah, I didn't did I? I have to change it, wouldn't want my reader to get disappointed 🫡 and yes, she does that. I hate that woman with all my heart, and yet I write about her(sigh)

I'm so glad you have decided to give your story a start and end, unlike many authors who stretch it out till it loses its essence. Then you're right to lock it early! Loving it so far <3

Starting strong, I see. I am pleasantly surprised by...everything in this novel! 1. The writing quality, I see an excellent use of grammatical structures and punctuation, there would be no problem for the reader to stop and re-read because they couldn't understand what you say(great job there :) ) 2. The plot: Cruel, sad and romantic, everything checks, so I think the only thing left to do is...keep writing this nice story. 3. The stability of updates: I see the chapters locked at 16, unless you plan to finish this story between 50-70 chapters this might not be a great idea :( Overall, this is a great story and I love how you bring your story to life with your words and works, and I hope to see more!

I don't know for sure for now(it seems like I strayed away from 'just 20 chapters' a long time ago lol), but I seem to like the idea of adding lore tidbits and different paths(I thought of it since the start, actually) and it seems like there might be a part 2, seeing there is a tragic ending for part 1. Stay strong soldier, this is not the end 🫡

lol she's just dumb ig

loll been waiting for your comment faithful reader, tis time we change things up a bit ;)

Hey, you know what they say? The true horror is none other than reality itself.

bruh I'm wheezing you're literally the life-force of this story loll

**insert phonk**

loll

My brain is not braining because I know I read half of that wrong. But based on the first and last sentence, it's like you're trying to tell me that punctuation isn't the main thing that's missing here. I don't think I would get a large following doesn't matter how large the amount of my chapters is. There is no 'rule', it's more of an unspoken condition, and it's what the readers want(subconsciously) in webnovel. Readers usually avoid chapters less than 100 chapters, so to get to at least 10k I might need at least 50 chapters.

I also feel like you woke up and chose violence loll[img=update]

I've used it in arbitrary places my entire life! Now I know where to put it, it's one less thing to worry about.

hmmm...that might be a cause. Elaborate...

loll no he hasn't.