My character is crazy, he talks alone because he's crazy during the dialogue with Garp, I wanted to make him understand, but if I didn't manage to get the right message across the story, I apologize
the author begins a story without hurrying. he does not make chapters with the sole aim of having access to monetization.
and he managed to make a character endearing in a very short time
It's a bit cheeky to make this kind of opinion about my own story. Besides, to sad for the can of words in the chapters as I write another story at the same time is complicated.