Review Detail of Arc_Dragon in Hollywood: Head-Hunting System

I wish I cpuld give it more no I will not.The stpry is good and it is going very interesting way.The chapters are little short and well its visible. You promoting yourself takes many words and the little left is the chapter.The story is too slow if you can't even get past his first year in Hollywood and its 100+ chapterd already.It is already slow well I gues if the chapters were little longer then the story wouldnot look slow as therr are many unnecessary chapters and even many smut chapters that are not needed.Too much will not make a goof story.Therr are many unnecessary chapters even so please look into those and keep writing. You don't have to go fast pace but just move the story a little bit a day by day story telling like journal will not help you.Your recaps and others things take half the chapters ..You will never finish if it is this slow .