Review Detail of RVN_1998 in Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
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I don't have much to say. I only ask that you try to read the first 15 to 20 chapters. The beginning is more of an introduction to the character, characteristics, and motivations. These chapters are definitely not to be skipped, but the novel's plot starts to develop after these first chapters. I plan to release 2 chapters a day most of the time, but one day or another I may only release 1. That's it. If you have any questions, ask directly in the chapters. (Sometimes, I won't see your comment here.) I will develop the auxiliary chapter little by little, so it won't be so empty forever.
Taking the Mafia to the Magic World
RVN_1998
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Its too dark the mc already has suffered being backstabbed in his first life now most of his family is disappearing and are suffering. You should do a royal family and prince mc and in the future becomes king or so instead that way the mc still has protection although his mother who gave birth to the prince aka mc does die that could be a tragedy. Rather than this one im suggesting it as look at the views.
Mcjbee_Lagman:Thiis masterpiece deserve to be a number one in new novel. The plot and concept are very good, much better than most of the top 10 or even the top 1 new novel here. I will continue to support this novel of you author. Goodluck! đ¤
Crimson_Wolf_0150:As much as I love this platform, I am broke. So while I understand if you canât, could you post this on other places so people like me can read this. Love the story so far!!!
The first chapters are an introduction. He only stays at the academy for the first few chapters, after which (about 10 ch) he continues his journey beyond that.
T_Tan:i havent read the novel but i saw the early chapter title is related to academy
right i've read that, i hope the anti-hero tag is true, i read some novel with anti-hero tag but the mc act like villain or anti-villain instead, its just disappointing to see that, hope this novel mc really an anti-hero.
RVN_1998:The first chapters are an introduction. He only stays at the academy for the first few chapters, after which (about 10 ch) he continues his journey beyond that.
zoom_9431:Its too dark the mc already has suffered being backstabbed in his first life now most of his family is disappearing and are suffering. You should do a royal family and prince mc and in the future becomes king or so instead that way the mc still has protection although his mother who gave birth to the prince aka mc does die that could be a tragedy. Rather than this one im suggesting it as look at the views.
tedmosby2016:You should add the harem tag so harem haters like us won't be tricked into reading it and hating it
RVN_1998:Are you talking about the tag that's been there since I launched the novel?
There is no system. As for the rest, I recommend the last three free chapters. You'll more or less understand what's going on from there.
Crycks:any kind of system or artifact that will help him grow? or will it all be natural with only his past life knowledge ?
Question. How long is he a child for? As an adult I have next to no interest in reading a story about children.
RVN_1998:There is no system. As for the rest, I recommend the last three free chapters. You'll more or less understand what's going on from there.