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i wanted to bash my head in because of all the grammatical and other mistakes in here...

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Harry Potter : The Change of Legacy ( Abandonned )

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Thank you for your feedback, I will try to improve for the next chapter, as I said in the synopsis, English is not my native language, I use translators but unfortunately it can make incomprehensible sentence