AaronSayre
I am a simple person who wants to write fanfiction in the Harry Potter universe. Warning: My native language is not English
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AaronSayre9mthReplied to DaoistMqj6trYes, of course, what I wrote was a reference to Suguru Geto.
Aberforth: But the day she started to develop feelings towards Muggles and threw away all her books written by them, to my great surprise and that of my brother, she started to pervert Darwin's thinking, she probably wanted to find a name to denigrate non-magical people, and thinking back on all her reading, she thought that calling them "monkeys" was perfectly appropriate, saying "If they think they're monkeys, good for them, I think the same of them". And afterwards, when she sometimes made very supremacist speeches about wizards who could even overshadow Grindelwald, she even said to me, "According to them, there's an evolution in human beings, I agree with them, they're still monkeys without magic, whereas we're the ones who've evolved and possess magic- AaronSayre9mthReplied to Ulvr_Laoch
I'm well aware that my grammar is bad, English isn't my first language, so I have to use a translator and a grammar aid like Grammarly to write my chapters, so please bear with me. I can advise you to read the few chapters there are and do your review after seeing them, at least you can give me your full opinion, which could even help me progress.
- AaronSayre9mthReplied to christian_rawson
Thank you for your message, don't worry I'll be creating more chapters, in fact, today I haven't made any new ones, I just wanted to take a break from writing, as it takes a lot of time and motivation to write just one chapter.
Ch 1 The Day She Received Her Letter From Hogwarts - AaronSayre9mthReplied to Kacper_Cwajda
Of course, Sebastian will be part of history and have a vast place, but I don't think it's relevant to make him watch the show with all the others, as he'll probably be dead before 1994.
[ Author's note: I hope you enjoyed this long chapter, if not I was wondering which character you'd want to react on screen, and be relevant of course otherwise I wouldn't add him ] - AaronSayre9mthReplied to Czarny_FleshCh 1 No chapter : 2 week break
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- AaronSayre10mthReplied to gg_gg_0642
He's considered a rival, but from all the feats we've seen he doesn't seem to be a level emperor, otherwise he could have beaten Shiki on his own without the help of Sengoku (It's Canon, it's not a film, it's in the chapter titled 0 by Oda) and above all come back from his fight without injury
Admiral and First Commander level: Akainu / Kizaru / Aokiji / Fujitora / Ryokugyu / Garp / Sengoku / Magellan / Shiryu / Mihawk / Marco / Zoro ( Post Wano ) / King / Beckman / Katakuri / Law ( Post Wano ) / Kid ( Post Wano ) - AaronSayre10mthReplied to ItsNotTheMoon
Yes indeed, I had to do it in a certain sense because as you say it solo One piece
- Time Acceleration: By accelerating time around him, Julius can greatly increase his speed to almost the speed of light. Only Admiral Kizaru with his fruit of light and those with Observation/Kenbunshoku Haki can see an attack from the wizard of Clover coming - AaronSayre10mthReplied to ItsNotTheMoon
Yes, you have to disregard some of the information I've given you, because at first I wanted to make a nerf, bringing his magic closer to how a devil fruit works, but with a vote I proposed, the truth now is that only the conqueror's Haki, by disrupting his concentration, cancels his magic, otherwise he has his original power.
- Chrono Stasis: By touching the opponent, this spell freezes the opponent's consciousness in time so that he lives in a time loop reliving a continuous moment in such a way that he is completely immobile in reality. The enemies prayed by the spell are in a sphere of blue colour and nobody can take them out of this capacity except in the way of the fruits of the demon by using a powerful Haki or by killing Julius. - AaronSayre10mthReplied to MISTER_Gf
Julius isn't very strong, in general, but it's his hax, time, that makes him incredibly strong because he could easily beat any Emperor or even character, because he can do the equivalent of Dio Brando's The World over a whole area with no time limit and then steal time from his opponents, However, seeing your messages, it's obvious to me that I need to make him as strong as the original, by adding an element from One Piece that will still make the battle a bit more challenging, and that's the Conqueror's Haki.
Ch 1 About Julius' Nerf (Vote) - AaronSayre10mthReplied to MISTER_GfCh 1 Chapter 7 : The overwhelming power of Haki
- AaronSayre10mthReplied to HufflePuff
Yes, the nerf that I presented earlier in the story, was way too important for Julius and it can create a lot of characters like Asta as you said, that's why I asked the reader's opinions to choose the nerf that he thinks is the best, because I still have to prevent the fact that Julius can destroy all the characters in the universe of One Piece with a good reason, for the story to be better.
Ch 1 About Julius' Nerf (Vote) - AaronSayre10mthReplied to gg_gg_0642
It's a good idea, and you're right in your reasoning, however given that I've already shown that he has his grimoire, I'm not making a nerf out of nowhere I think it will keep its power extremely powerful, with the nerf of the Haki of conquerors that readers seem to prefer in view of the votes for now.
3 ) You choose, essentially the second option, however, to make a good Nerf, you think that it is necessary that Julius by a circumstance or an event, returns to the young age of 13 years then it returns to be superpowered in the future, until invincible - AaronSayre11mthReplied to AaronSayre
I sincerely think to make young Julius either by a circumstance of his entry in the world or by an event, young in the age of 13 years, and then to make him powerful until being invincible, not to make a clumsy nerf
- Time Annihilation: The wizard king, create an orb in each hand that erases from existence everything with which they come into contact by accelerating the target so much that it is transformed into dust. However, this only works with weak opponents. - AaronSayre11mthReplied to King_Of_SpaceTime
No don't worry, it's a good review, I've even talked recently during a chapter with a reader, because it's something that comes out, that I have way too much nerf, and that it would have been necessary either that I make him young or he doesn't have all his power anymore or that he ate the Toki Toki No Mi and that he doesn't have this ability, because I admit that the ability to kill instantement is really difficult to put in a story.
- Time Annihilation: The wizard king, create an orb in each hand that erases from existence everything with which they come into contact by accelerating the target so much that it is transformed into dust. However, this only works with weak opponents. - AaronSayre11mthReplied to gg_gg_0642
Yes, you're right, it's much more interesting, thank you, I'd try to bring it back to a younger age, during an event or circumstance, to be able to adjust its power and not nerf it awkwardly, and yes, I'd make the Conqueror's Haki work that way against magic.
And this blocked her in time, and Julius thought he had won, but in her sphere, she wore a big smile and to his astonishment, he could see that all around her sphere there was a big flash of black, it was Haki. Julius again couldn't understand why his magic, so supreme, seemed to be reduced to nothing, while Diana gave him the most beautiful of smiles.