Review Detail of OVERKILL in The Primordial Record
Review detail
only read upto 4 chapters because of daily recommendation .too much unnecessary details . boring or my mood is just off. first 3 chapter were about surrounding object like corpse , luxurious doors , big expensive mirror etc. i couldn't focus because situation of MC doesn't seem tiny bit desperate or serious so why useless details .
The Primordial Record
BRICKTRADER
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Kurdi123:At least think before rebly why would I bother to read if I see a flag even if it was solved and it does not change the fact with how early it goes to paid chapters if 4 of them are already at least according to the review are a waste of time and its not like I was the one to give a 1 star if you bother me without much sense behind it even if I just tried to warn you then I will spam 1 star till you lose your motivation to even write
I debated a lot in making my first chapters to be detailed, but if you try to read the first volume, you would understand it importance,It has a mystery tag, and those early details are to establish the subtle nuances in the story. I know its not for everyone, but if you check it out later in your free time, I hope you will be surprised.
wow instant reply . I will read this book latter and leave a review , right now I'm sleepy 😪.tommoro night
BRICKTRADER:I debated a lot in making my first chapters to be detailed, but if you try to read the first volume, you would understand it importance,It has a mystery tag, and those early details are to establish the subtle nuances in the story. I know its not for everyone, but if you check it out later in your free time, I hope you will be surprised.
OVERKILL:there only 29 free chapters , 4 of them i read are useless .there is 11 chapters titled as Moon light 1 to 11 . it seems to be waste my free pass and coins . that's the impression i get.
I did not even read this but if your chapter names are like this then this Novel is a turn big red flag that I just cant bother to read
BRICKTRADER:I will work on those chapter names lol... It's not filler
Lol... I changed the chapter names, so please read them. I wrote the first eleven chapters in one sitting, using over nine hours. I was too tired to make proper-sounding chapter names, but that has been long resolved. At least read a single chapter before passing judgment, that's all I ask. Have a great day!
Kurdi123:I did not even read this but if your chapter names are like this then this Novel is a turn big red flag that I just cant bother to read
At least think before rebly why would I bother to read if I see a flag even if it was solved and it does not change the fact with how early it goes to paid chapters if 4 of them are already at least according to the review are a waste of time and its not like I was the one to give a 1 star if you bother me without much sense behind it even if I just tried to warn you then I will spam 1 star till you lose your motivation to even write
BRICKTRADER:Lol... I changed the chapter names, so please read them. I wrote the first eleven chapters in one sitting, using over nine hours. I was too tired to make proper-sounding chapter names, but that has been long resolved. At least read a single chapter before passing judgment, that's all I ask. Have a great day!
Kurdi123:At least think before rebly why would I bother to read if I see a flag even if it was solved and it does not change the fact with how early it goes to paid chapters if 4 of them are already at least according to the review are a waste of time and its not like I was the one to give a 1 star if you bother me without much sense behind it even if I just tried to warn you then I will spam 1 star till you lose your motivation to even write
Wow...i only asked you to read a single FREE chapter and make an opinion for yourself. Your reply is excessively rude and bitter. I can assure you, that no matter how much you waste your life in an attempt to troll me, I will never stop writing.
Kurdi123:At least think before rebly why would I bother to read if I see a flag even if it was solved and it does not change the fact with how early it goes to paid chapters if 4 of them are already at least according to the review are a waste of time and its not like I was the one to give a 1 star if you bother me without much sense behind it even if I just tried to warn you then I will spam 1 star till you lose your motivation to even write
If you're having a screw loose upstairs just fix it don't bother us here Read most of your replies to novels and they just utter rubbish You're problem the type that doesn't have contentment Go fix yourself brr
Kurdi123:At least think before rebly why would I bother to read if I see a flag even if it was solved and it does not change the fact with how early it goes to paid chapters if 4 of them are already at least according to the review are a waste of time and its not like I was the one to give a 1 star if you bother me without much sense behind it even if I just tried to warn you then I will spam 1 star till you lose your motivation to even write
Samuel_Bolawa:If you're having a screw loose upstairs just fix it don't bother us here Read most of your replies to novels and they just utter rubbish You're problem the type that doesn't have contentment Go fix yourself brr
Kurdi123:At least think before rebly why would I bother to read if I see a flag even if it was solved and it does not change the fact with how early it goes to paid chapters if 4 of them are already at least according to the review are a waste of time and its not like I was the one to give a 1 star if you bother me without much sense behind it even if I just tried to warn you then I will spam 1 star till you lose your motivation to even write
