This story is really interesting. I haven't read something with this setting before. If it developed more, it might create a uniqueness for the story. The author done a good job on character design. The writing need a little bit of touch, so it will come neat. It's still easy to understand atm, but I just feels it will be much more better to edit the typo and un-edit typing. Overall the story have a great starter, I hope it released more frequent. As this definitely would gain more attention. This genre are popular so there's a chance to gain more reader by releasing the chapter in schedule đ
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