Review Detail of Violet_Ivory in Lawyer Magus Transmigrated to the Immortal Realm(Moved to a New Link)

First off, the grammar is good, not many issues with spelling of punctuation. The real problem, at least in the beginning chapters, is that it often flunctuated between good sentence structure and relatively more mediocre structure. The flow felt kinda messy with a lot of room for improvement. I can tell you’ve read alot of cultivation novels, judging by all this lore you’re dumping. It sort of made me go 😵‍💫 at some instances. I think the concept is cool and might genuinely be a good read for someone looking to pick this up 👍