Review Detail of SugmaMaleGamer in Danmachi: Honored One

I tried this one but the grammar is meh readable, characters are bland, mc is kinda cringe. The story is boring and cliche like it came from the average reincarnation three wishes fic that doesn't last long and gets dropped at around 30 or so chapters. Please do some research first on fic you are making before writing. Try to come up with some original ideas too because I have read this same kind of format of fanfic hundreds of times already. Anyways try to improve your writing and when you do then do a rewrite or make a new fic.