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DetachedDreamer
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Good story about a mentally impaired child who thinks he's a dog. his name is Jackie the jackal. at least that's what I call him. Not a fan of danmachi fanfics that don't join familias. its the literal foundation of the story but authors on here get desperate to be different. I guess his power helps with that but regardless. unneeded, as the last ten danmachi fanfics have followed the same pattern. None have been impressive so far but we will see how this turns out. Idk how I feel about a mentally impaired guy getting the attention of women who ignore his brand of crazy but I do find the story overall decently humorous with its unique MC and perspective. story takes some getting use to but it smooths out and feels natural after a few chapters. overall an odd but entertaining story.

Is it Wrong to Employ Cute Girls in a Store?

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spot on but im only a few chapters in